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Me again. Just wanted to ask you one thing. I was reading your reviews and this guy was talking about another story thats about Vegeta/Chibi Gohan, I just wanted to ask what\'s the name of the story. I realy want to read it. I bet is as hot as this story.
Please tell me. If you want you can e-mail me at ramirez-f@sbcglobal.net
Please put your name and the name of the story so I wont delate it OK.
I\'ll be waiting.
^_^

What will Goku do now that he caught Goten and Raditz together? Hurry with the next chapter!!!

Hey this is frickin` HOT!!!!! But is Radditzu going to fuck his nephew allredy?? I mean, a little kid as the seme??And whazzup with Gokou, he`s like depressed because of Vegita or sumthin`,right? Since you `re doing an incest lemon why not throw Gokou in the mix?? I mean Radditzu and Gokou, not Gokou and Goten. I just can`t see the Sons as s, ts, that`s all. I think Radditzu should be the seme. I just read this really hot Radditzu+Gokou fic on this site, \"Mare Serenatis\", or sumthin`, didn`t think those even existed...So make Radditzu fuck Gokou!!! That would be hot. Incest rules. White Dog

Yesss!!! You `re gonna write the Vegeta/chibi Gohan lemon!!! Could my day start any better??? So when are you gonna post it??# coughcoughtodaycoughcough # ^-^

Hehee, I can`t believe Raditz lost his virginity to Goten ^-^ That means that before the showerfucking he had no idea how good it would feel right??

Hey I got an idea. Raditz is pretty frustrared about not getting to fuck Goten. Maybe he could get his frustrations out on Goku and Goten would see this and get really pissed and envious!??
THEN Goten would surely be eager to finally submit to his uncle ^-^.......

I dunno, maybe you have something else in mind allready, I just have NO IDEA what is going to happen about Goku in the next chappy, such a mean clifhanger, ggrrrrrrrrrr!!!!!!! >:)
I CAN`T WAIT!!!!! You`re worse than the devil himself!!!! The most evil creature in the universe you are!!!

God:\"Close, but not quite.\"

Orlando:\"Huh? Who is it then??\"

God:\"Take a good look in the mirror lately-_-?\"

Orlando:\"I have mirrors in the ceiling of my bedroom :P !?\"

God:\"That`s more information that I need. Now go to church!!\"

Orlando:\"Allright, allright...(at least I can allways draw naughty pictures of chibi Goten and Raditz in the backrow heehee..^-^)\"

Please update soon on BOTH stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Orlando(I can`t call myself Orgasmo `cause He seto bto be mad at me for some reason??? Go figure^-^!??)

wow now this is getting really good!!i have to admit i was expecting Raditz to fuck Goten but all in due time, right??:) all in due time...i really didn`t see this Goku thing coming but it`s pretty intense. i wonder why he was so upset about??otherwise he would have gone ballistic on Raditz(not like THAT you hentai!!)
now i really can`t wait another second is Goku going to join in on the fun??what did Raditz mean when he thought \"with or without Goku?\":)hmmmm??now you`re propably gonna take a nice lttle weekend\"break\" and leave me writhing with ancsiety >:)???!!!
UPDATE ASAP!!!
Da Perv

I`s 3:40 in the afternoon and I just woke up. What better to go with my cup of morning tea than a nice dose of penetration :)??? And a quick trip to take a morning \"shower\",eh eh...Rich. I`m on fire.

I`m glad you decided to include Goku in the \"storyline\"(oh please!!), and, I have to admit, the ki cuffs were a better idea than mine. After all, this way the bitch (aka Bulma) won`t find out about Raditzs and Gotens little ballgames (I`m sure I wont be able to stop you from \"misunderstand" th" that^_~)

I won`t even suggest anything at this point, why, the possibilities of this situation are just too delicious not to be taken advantage of ;)....

I might be an educated hentai, but even I am not foolish enough to mess with THIS mouterinering cliffy!!

Update soon,

Agent Smith

Now that I think about all the Bulma/Vegeta fics I used to read, I just feel...embarrased and sick! Did I call you sick? Oooops, I meant to say straight sex is sick!! I mean, I don`t have anything AGAINST them or anything, it`s just that thinking about the graphic act itself makes me nauseous, you know?

I don`t think I`ll have to sign any forms after THAT little comment XD!!! Well, at least I won`t have to pack a lot of clothing to where I`m going....

And it`s all your fault!!! Damn you and your fingers!!(for writing...^-^)

Sicko, official member since 2003

hey you cant just leave it like that !!!!that wasnt very nice thing to do:(!!!!please update asap!!!!i never seen thise two together but i like it......

I don`t think I`ve ever seen a fic this short get this many reviews!! At least not on this site. Thus, I had to check it out. Popularity turns me on even more than good yaoi ^.^
Who would have thought that this ...unorthodox, to say the least, pairing would be welcomed like this??? And not a single flame yet!!
Well, flaming is really stupid. I mean, why waste your valuable time telling an anynomous person you don`t like their work??You know it`s still not going to make a difference!
I guess people don`t really flame around here, it`s more of a ff.net kind of phenomena, since the little kiddies over there don`t know how to read warnings...I can`t believe I used to go to that site*shudders*
Better late than never, right??I`m going to be keeping my eye on this story, it`s proceeding nicely and has several unsolved tensions lingering in the air...I wonder if there will be any emotional attachment formbetwbetween the two..?
Or is this an oldschool PWP fic ? I`ll be watching with interest...
Colin

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