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Wow!! Talk about HOT AND HEAVY!! Keep up the great work!!

You fucking sick twisted mentally ill unclefucker!!! You are so SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK SICK !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I like it please write more :)

ok first I thought the shower masturbating thing was a little strange, but now after reading it a couple of times I`m starting to get the \"hang of it\"heheee... whatthe hell is taking you so it it must have been allready 24 hours!!
and you have to tell me if raditzs tail is sensitive it`s kinda important, to me at least...
update allready!!!

oh i love it ......can\'t wait tell you update ......oh what is goku going to do?????????? this is good plz update soon

Hi. Just came to check out if you updated yet. Nope >.<...sigh... This is just my luck: when I have no acces to the computer, you update all the time, and when I finally have time on my hands, It seems I have to wait forever....

Anyways, I just thought I`d let you know that the part where Goten masturbated in front of Raditz(I even had a dream about that scene^_^)inspirated me quite a bit: I illustrated a \"couple\" of pictures about it, and even a few, in which Goten ties his uncle up and #PARENTAL ADVISORY#
I now have a bunch of papers in my drawer no-one wiler ser see(for obvious reasons, too^_~)!!!

You are probably regretting your actions already, thinking\" This fan is too much!!How can I meet his/her outrageous demands??\" Oh dear, you have NO idea what you`ve gotten yourself into....>:)

Your wondering why I used the form \"his/her\"? The answer is: thanks to your fics, I nowadays consider myself an \"it\" :P

Puh-lease update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Orlando(I should probably change my name to smo^smo^_^)

I don`t know what happened there. Part of my \"review\" just disappeared. Maybe it`s a sign from God for me to stop this and finally become a normal, healthy person.

I really hope that wasn`t his best shot ^-^!!!

God:\"I shall make you normal again one day!!!\"

Orlando:\"Again? Dude, sorry to disappoint you but I was BORN LIKE THIS, BABY!!!

God:\"You shall kneel in front of me!! No one resists the Allmighty Lord!!\"

Orlando:\"Hmmm... That sounded kinda hot....\" # starts to remove clothes #

God:\"NO NO NO!!! NOT LIKE THAT!!!\"

Orlando:\"What?! You`re the one who started with the dirrty talk!??\"

God:\"Enough!! I`ve cast seven plagues upon Egypt. I THINK I can save one mortal from doom!\"

Orlando:\"I wouldn`t put my money on it^-^\"

Please update soon!!!

Orlando

wow that was...different^_^ hey I got one q: howcome was R grooming his tail? I thought the tail is supposed to be as sensitive as a cock or sumthin`?? at least it is in the other stories, well, answer in the next chappy and thanks for updating

Da Perv

I must correct two errors, I insist^_^. First of all, you do not aim to please me. You LIVE to please me. Understood? Because it`s been working so far^_~!! Secondly, someone claimed that Goten was a cockteaser. Bullshit. YOU are the cockteaser!!
I really appreciate your superfast updating, but the chapters could be longer(I live on smut :9)... Yaoi lemons can never be too long, so don`t be shy(HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!! You?? Shy??)

I don`t want anyone else involved, at least not yet, since they HAVEN`T EVEN FUCKED YET!!!(hint, hint...)
I`ve been thinking about a Vegetaxchibi Gohan lemon, so if you are absolutely, positively sure you`re not going to write it#pout#, then you might throw Vegeta in to the RaditzxGoten-mix... But only if you`re REALLY SUPER SURE#extra-chibi-Goten-pout#!!!! Please think about it, if you`re not too busy^_^??
I don´t think they need any special toys, other than Raditzs tail(I`m sure you`ll come up with something to do with it^_~)

Please think about my offer, and,if you do it, I want Vegeta to be playfull and seductive and chibi Gohan to be eager and submissive...
Keep updating like this, no-one else does!!:P

I gotta go now, I`m late for church.

Orlando(I can`t think of anything that rhimes, but surely the \"church\"thing was entertainment enough^_^)

You should get paid to do this.

In the next chapter I hope to see some penetration. I think Goten should steal some ki-resistant cuffs from Bulma and tie his uncle up and do what the hell ever he wants with him.

I like the fast updates just as much as everyone else, but I think it would be worth a wait if you make the next chapter a bit longer and take advantage of all the material you have available: underline how WRONG it is. Wrong really does it for me:). Maybe they could secretly fuck while Gokou was in the next room or something, now THAT would be hot!! And I, too, would like to see some bondage with Goten as the dominant one. He doesn`t have to use any objects, instead he could blind-fold his uncle and tease him long and agonisingly...;) Forced to be quiet because of the others in the house...

You can take your time, if the next part is going to be 2-3 times longer, but if not, be kind and update TODAY!!!:) Who says I`m demanding??

It seems a certain room is calling me again:)...

Agent Smith

What do you know?? I came here to flame you for pairing these two up, but as a responsible reviewer, I always READ the fics I`m about to flame.

I was going to call you a sick pervert, but then I realised that would make ME a sick pervert. Why?? Because I LIKED IT!! I`ve NEVER liked incest before and I blame you!!

So, I`m going to Hell. Might as well have some fun. So where do I sign??

Update soon, you bastard!!