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that was good. it\'s kinda gross that it\'s incest but it was good. update soon

OH MY FUCKIN` GOD!!!! I can`t believe this!! Have I died and gone to heaven??? My eyes nearly popped out when I saw the summary of this fic, I seriously didn`t think you`d actually do it, and so soon, too!! Too bad I didn`t have acces on the PC earlier, damn!! Now THAT was fuckin`hot, even better than I had imagined it in my head!!!^_^ Wow. Please don`t tell me you`re just gonna leave it there, are you?? YOU CAN`T JUST STOP LIKE THIS!!!!! YOU CAN´T!!! I mean, not until theck eck each other ^_~!!?? I really appreciate what you are doing here, it`s about time for this couple!! I still can`t believe you wrote this for me, you made my day!! I`m gonna be all \"googoo-gaagaa\" for the rest of the day :9...

Please write a sequell, that cliffy was really mean and you`re such a great yaoi writer!!!UPDATE ASAP!!!!

Orlando(who`s not going commando)^_^ hey, I`m a poet!

You sure know how to get the job done, don`t you:)? I have never seen this pairing anywhere, and if you ask me, this is exactly what the DBZ characters are for: pairing them in ways that normally would make people sick, and sending the readers to their bathrooms. I know I had to go to mine:)...

I don`t like fics with \"plots\" or romance, because, francly, no DBZ character has enough depht or a single characteristic that a person could fall in love with. But they are goodlooking and never have sex on the show, which makes them perfect porn material. I don`t support incest in real life,(well duh!) and if this was real, I`d be sick by now, but when it`s Raditz and chibi Goten, it`s odly exiting. I don`t know how you came up with this pairing, it`s brilliant :D!!

Please update soon and save me from these realms of \"gokuxvegeta and trunksxgoten\"blaaaaah....

You are my breeze of fresh air!!!

Agent\"we meet again, Mr Anderson.\"Smith

write more....you cock teaser.

Oops! hehehe, anyway, you have to UPDATE this fic! It truely brings out the hentai in me!!! ^_^ Omg please update soon, I love it!

Wow!!! This is a pairing I never seen before! Cool! Please continue with the story!!

...I don\'t know what to say. Don\'t know wether to shamelessly shout \'Whoohoo! Continue!\' or not. ^_^\' After all, he is only 11 but... the way you described Goten, he was just too adorable. ^.^ So... I\'m just going to say to myse'oh,'oh, what the heck.\' and ask you kindlykeepkeep on writing and... keep up the good job, hm? Thanks. ^_^

Great story keep it up.
I never read a fic with these two \'involve\'
^_^ me like a lot