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January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't bear to read this trough!!!
There are SO many grammar mistakes that's painful! You have no idea how much it hurts me, because the plot is really good (we don't see much of Goku-Trunks fics around here) and the characterization is great, in fact.
Please, email me if you want me to beta your fic. It has so much potential
There are SO many grammar mistakes that's painful! You have no idea how much it hurts me, because the plot is really good (we don't see much of Goku-Trunks fics around here) and the characterization is great, in fact.
Please, email me if you want me to beta your fic. It has so much potential
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February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Um... The story idea was good but you REALLY need to get someone to edit your grammar and spelling errors...
It kindof ruined it sometimes when every other word was spelled or conjugated incorrectly...
It's a good story though, and despite that I had to stumble over all the typing errors, I enjoyed it.
It kindof ruined it sometimes when every other word was spelled or conjugated incorrectly...
It's a good story though, and despite that I had to stumble over all the typing errors, I enjoyed it.
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February 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Man! I have no idea where this is going! Pretty good for a first time! Please finish!