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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
KYAAAAAAAAAAAA THIS IS FRIGGIN AMAZING!!!!!! 8D Omg, I haven't even gotten half way into this story yet, and I am utterly captivated! The entire story thus far has been purely awesome, and I can't thank you enough for making ChiChi a nice person in this story- love how she has such a feisty lover btw XD Anyway, I simply love this story- DEFINITELY one of my favorites by far, and I'm gonna be reading it again in the future for sure! You're an awesome writer! =D
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I've mentioned this anywhere else, but I LOVE this chapter. The pacing is great, there's that nice blend of humor and serious, you cover a lot of ground...it's wonderful. Not anyone can convey such complicated emotions and relationships in such a short amount of space.
Also - the way you resolved the whole "awkward" thing at the end was great. I think my new favorite lines in fanfiction history are now "Ow, Piccolo."
Just a lot of fun to read ^^
Also - the way you resolved the whole "awkward" thing at the end was great. I think my new favorite lines in fanfiction history are now "Ow, Piccolo."
Just a lot of fun to read ^^
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww...I love that. The Goku-helpful impulse strikes again. ^^ It's been so long since I first read this...I'd forgotten how much fun it was.
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February 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a great way of setting up the situation in this story - and explaining how Goku knows what the heck he's doing. An interesting take on the afterlife, one not a lot of people have thought of, and...well, just plain good ^^. I'm so glad I decided to reread this story!
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April 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wet - man...what a time to get interrupted ^^ Nicely handled, and a good place to add in humor.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You're doing great work here as usual in this chapter - Goku and Vegeta seem like they're going to make it, and the handling of tension throughout was impressive. Also...kudos to you for how you're handling Piccolo in this story! He's great to see always, and he's refreshingly logical in a story like this where there's so much emotion.
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
For Paranoia - Another set of great exchanges. You have some fun dialogues in this one, that's for sure. ^^
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Y'know, I've never read this fic before - but I'm enjoying it thus far ^^ Your interactions between Piccolo, Gohan, and Goku in this chapter were great, and I'm not just saying that. I'm looking forward to seeing this story develop!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never would have thought of Olibu - but you, of course, made it believable ^^ This story is full of great twists. I can't believe I didn't read it sooner!