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Wow, very fast indeed! I couldn\'t even review in time!! You can do that more often, I don\'t mind... I can\'t wait till the ship comes, I think it has something to do to Veggie\'s moodswings and the voices, it seems to get worse now that the ship is getting closer. Well, I\'ll see in time. Keep up the fast updates.

My thanks go to Midnight-Flame Princess, if you really wrote this yummy lemon for her. An you you of course, for filling her request!

You did update fast. I looked at the posting, and I thought to lf. lf. \"No way,\" but it was true! Yay!

sorry i haven\'t updated in a while I DIDN\'T MEAN IT I SWEAR!!!!!!!!!!! its just thats i have finals comin\' up in a few days there a pain in the *** & its really drainin\' me of my energy. i feel bad that i haven\'t updated it wasn\'t what i want sorry again.

but other then thhe fhe fic\'s great i love it & PLEASE don\'t cliff hang u had me on the edge of my sit when u ended those to chaps & i was diin\' to know what happened next. & from what i can see when Vegeta gots some serios problems with that damn voice that keeps buggin\' him & poor Goku doesn\'t knoat tat the hell to do. what does he have to do to get the voice to stop anyway? SEE now look at what u\'ve done i\'m on the edge of my sit just askin\' these questions.......grrrrrr......oh well i\'ll live just as long as u keepin\' writin\' *smile*

Cat

i love this fic ^_^ i\'ve been reading since you first started, and it keeps getting better, the story has a plot, and a good one at that, and still works in the deliciously juicy lemons. i check to see if you\'ve updated at least 3 times a week. i want to hear more from Gohan, last time he appeared he sounded rather left out, even un happy about his situation w/ being the only strait person in the family, and i\'d like it if you played that up. or maybe i\'m not remembering the story corectly. it\'s been going on for sooooo long. it\'s great, epics rock!!! but if it doesn\'t work into the story line, no biggie. just keep updating!!!!!!!!

YAY! Another chapter so soon. I\'m so very happy. SQUEE! The thought of Vegeta curling up next to Goku is so cute. Urge to glomp...rising... Goku would kill me for glomping his Prince, but I\'d risk it anyway. Will we learn more about whatever or whoever is approaching the planet soon? My curiosity s beginning to burn a hole in me. Keep it coming and update again soon.

~Kira~

Glomping right back at ya - thanks for the welcome. Nice chapter. They will either save each other or ruin each other (hopefully save cos I really want a happy ending here - incurably romantic I know). Maybe the ship and whoever is on it (have my suspicions!) will be the catalyst for Vegeta to excorsise his demons and realise his love? No? Aw go on!! Can\'t wait for 35. PS What\'s happening with the other characters? Is Gohan alright about stuff now? Dende and Krillin need sorting out and I do like ChiChi and Rezu...

Hope this works - I\'m new to AFF and this is my first ever review - took a long time to screw up the courage! I have been checking every day for Ch 33 and now its up! Love the way you write, love the way you get inside the characters. Please please keep going (hmm now I guess to have to make up a name - eek!).

Aww...I got the warm fuzzies! :)

I am very happy that Goku is so steadfast in his devotion to Vegeta. If he weren\'t it would make this struggle that they are about to go through unbareable; they wouldn\'t make it through as a couple.

I found it very disturbing that Vegeta was able to break his own tail. I hope that Goku mentions the Voice\'s vocal reaction to him touching Vegeta\'s angry/red scar ealier. I think that there may be a key to this whole mess, and not mentioning this detail could leave the clue unfound.

I know that there is still the tha that is coming to earth to worry about, but I hope pro problem is delt with first.

I was trying to explain to a non-dbz-watching friend how sensitive Saiyan tails are and she was just like, \'so it\'s like having two dicks\'? Not sure about that one. Anyway,k cool fic, carry on! Not that you\'re gonna stop here anyway.