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oh, joy in the morning! Vegeta\'s back! will goku ask Vegeta to tell him all that he remembers at each blackout? Maybe there\'s something common about all of them? Aw, dammit! and I thought they could just get the dragonballs... but nothing is ever that easy, or there wouldn\'t be any fun in the reading. Hehe... \'twas a thought.

hmm..I must have misread something in the last chapter because I tht Vht Vegeta broke Goku\'s tail. Didn\'t realize it was his own tail he broke. Ah well. It\'s all cleared up now at least. (my brain likes to play tricks on me). And yeah, I do get very emotional when reading at times, but that\'s how I distinguish between the stories I absolutely love and the ones that are ok or worse. Any fic that can elevate my emotions and make me feel what the characters are feeling is an amazing fic, which is what this one is. I\'m a little worried that one day I just might get so hyped I\'ll just get up and do a very unsuccessful backflip ending up with me planting my face in the ground *ouchies*. Maybe I should strap myself down when reading...

Well keep up the great work and update soon.

~Kira~

How very right you are. How horrible! My poor Veggie. Does this have something to do with the approaching ship?? By the way: WHAT\"S WITH THE CLIFFY\'S?!?!?!!? You are mean, I can\'t sleep at night feeling sorry for my poor little princeling. *I\'m only slightly overreacting* Well, hurry up!!! time for the next very cool chapter.

Agh! No! Stupid evil voice! Get out of my prince\'s body this instant or I\'ll come in and rip you out myself! Grr... Fight it Vegeta! Fight it! *blushes in embarassment for having actually screamed all that out loud*
Man I love this story more and more with each chapter! Yeah! Keep it coming and please update soon!

~Kira~

oooooooOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!! *hugz self* broke his tail?! **stamps feet** that must hurt like a sonofabitch to a saiyajin!!!! Yeesh!!! ::ish suddenly furious:: snaps! That stupid Frieza has gotten so far into veegta that he\'s able to take over his body for a couple seconds at a time!!! What\'s this shell that\'s left? It\'s neither the voice, nor is it the Ouji. So.... what\'s there? This robotic personality that goes back and forth between responding as Vegeta would, and as the voice commands. Is it going to worsen as it has been? Will Vegeta be imprisoned within his own form, just a helpless onlooker, unable to command his own body? Is Dende gonna pull another stupid ass stunt and force Goku to kill him?(piccoloc ould do it just as well) Y\'know, that\'s not a bad idea... but there is that problem with the dragonballs. Couldn\'t they be used to find out what\'s happening to Vegeta? When are the peopleson the ship due to arrive, and who the heck are they?! Grrrrr....!!!! *sits down* next chappie!! More more more!

Looks like the answer to what the voice is is getting closer. I hope that the mystery isavleavled soon. I hate to see Vegeta fighting this seeming invisible enemy, and I hate the angst that Goku is going through.

I liked the chapter though. I think that I would have to be a crazy person to actually \'like\' what is happening to those two.

I hope that Dende has had an attitude adjustment, and is more helpful with healing the Prince this time.

Ahhhhh!!!!! Cliffhanger! My worst nightmare. Update soon, please!

Oh my...my poor Geta. What the hell is going on. *pouts* Goku is going to be crazy by the time this is over. That damned voice, it\'s taking control. Whatever will they do!

What? NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Dammit! What in the world happened to vegeta?! Tell meeeeeeee!!! pleeeeeeeeaaaase!!!! RRR! *on a lighter note* Yea! Go Goku! You tell that little guardian pest who\'s boss! ^__^ I think it will be very interesting to see how he\'ll attempt to make amends *if* he ever does.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! What have you done to my poor Veggie??? *more circles* This cliffy is even worse!!! Aahhhhh! How could you!! You better update soon! I can\'t take it annymore *sob sob* Well, whatever, excuse the little panic attack. Hope I dont have to wait too long.