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person Kira
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh geez *fits of laughter* can\'t breathe...*more involuntary laughter* help me..need oxygen...
I love it. Not one, but two people to walk in on Vegeta and Goku. *takes moment to attempt to regain composure* Poor Vegeta...
Never a dull moment is there? You have such an awesome sense of humor. Keep it coming!

I still like the idea of a Piccolo and Vegeta double team...hey if not on Yamcha then how about Krillin?

Ok that all nighter I pulled s taking it\'s toll on me. I go sleepy bye now.

~Kira~
person XxNeko_YoukaixX
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
instead of wet as ur chap ya ahould have just named in sex ^^ but yeah love the chap it was nice to have at least one chap where Vegeta was havin\' *fun* & didn\'t have the voice buggin\' him. but yeah i like the enddin\' to this chap u had me laughin\' for a good 15 minutes about how the two walked in on Goku & Vegeta. hehe can\'t wai see see what happans in the next chap & is Krillian gonna die or is he gonna be just laughed out of the fic? whatever it is make him in tears i \'cause he should be for bein\' such an ass to them ^^ hehe krillian gonna die! ^^ or whatever but yeah thats really the only question i have right but never fear i will be back for more!! MUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! (note i\'m hyper right now)
person ~Evil
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, it was worth waiting for is all I can say. Really cool that mind sex. Hope the next chappy will be there sooner, but if its gonna be as good as this, i\'ll be prepaired to wait:).
person jaygoose
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness...that had to be extremely embarassing. Poor Piccolo...I think he took it well though. ChiChi...hum... I wonder what question that was...I have some ideas though...Vegeta and Goku shouldn\'t feel too bad though, in most fics Saiyan bathrooms don\'t fair to well anyway.
person Kurai
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once agian greaqt. I do not think this story can get any better. Just don\'t take so long next time, so getting any comments are devart for the story?????
person Crystal
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Guess whos comp is broken now? Mine! yes! Im reading this at my friends house. ironic, eh? lol. well, it was a great chapter, keep it up!
person DragonGod
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic!
person Shan
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so fucking excellent I\'m putting it on my recs. Incidentally, Krillin has to die, but you knew that already. I was lucky, my mum\'s in happy la-la-denial-land and thinks I\'m confused. Whatever. It\'s nice to see Vegeta perking up a bit.
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*didn\'t I say I wasn\'t going to review every chapter? * Anyway loved this line from chp 3:

\"Fish. Now. Go. Food.\"

~Card
person Card
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Pets Vegeta* It\'ll all be alright hunny.

Poor dear.

Seeing how you\'ve got so many chapters finished I really ought to go back to reading them. But I figured I\'d drop you this little note *drops boulder on foot and whimpers * Anyway... (Don\'t mind the insanity) I just wanted to say that I probably won\'t rw evw every single chapter. But I\'ll keep on reading. (And reviewing, I\'m sure.)

Tootie-Fruitie,
Card~

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