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April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I see my friend has reviewed finally. She loves it more than I do, I think. Lol. Another good chapter. Very heartfeI liI like how Bulma\'s bf is totally p/w-ed. Ha! Keep i!Cr!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MWAHAHA! Now THAT is how the Saiyajin no ouji should act! I\'m kind of relieved. Everything was so unsteady for a while. WOW! OMG, I so completely forgot about that incident with the dragon! O.O *and the pieces fall together* ^__________^ MOOOOOOOOORE!
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, perfect! I reeeeeeaaaaaaaallyy hope it\'ll stay this way:) I\'m always checking twice a day if you updated my favorite story. And this very fast update really made my day. Thank you. And a very nice chappy at that. (Well, I secretly hoped Vegeta would be a little bit meaner. Esp. to Yamcha;).) More Piccolo Veggie soon?? I hope so. Well, keep it up, I\'ll be waiting.
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, another update, so soon. Excelle Co Congratulations on getting over 100 reviews. :-)
I really liked this chapter. The scenes with Vegeta and Yamcha were fun. I enjoyed them, and although Vegeta\'s intent was not sinister, it was a joy to watch him messing with Yamcha. The guy needs a serious beating for being such an arsehole, but considering that Vegeta knows that this is something he won\'t be doing, then his own method of revenge is sweet enough. :-)
Pleased to see that Vegeta stood proud and showed true class when speaking to Bulma. Really love that he is determined to still play a part in his son\'s life, no matter how much this fact seemed to have surprised Bulma.
This chapter has shown Bulma in a more favourable light than when we last saw her, and although she showed signs of regret for the way she treated Vegeta, and even offered excuses as to why she had done so. I personally can\'t forgive her or Yamcha for their actions. She had many options in which to tell Veget sod sod off, and she chose one of the most despicable methods around. Still, I am glad that Vegeta is content enough in his life to be able to move on from it all, and remain on agreeable terms with her.
I was so hoping that Vegeta would tell them about him and Goku...sigh...oh well, another time maybe?
I really do love the way you have portrayed ChiChi in this story. I love it that she is actually Vegeta\'s \'champion\' whether he wanted it or not. :-)
Here\'s something that I forgot when I got all emotionally analytical in my previous post:
\"~~Pity he won\'t be staying with you. It would be interesting to see what it takes to make him scream.~~\"
Arrrrgh! Forgot about the previous taunts of this nature. Blocked it I suppose. Scares the hell out of me.
I can\'t see Vegeta taunting himself with these thoughts. Yes, I can see him having fears of this nature, him being unsure just how warped his years with Freiza had made him. But no, I can\'t see him actually taunting himself with thoughts like this. So my whole theory from the previous review has just been flushed down the toilet.
Guess, I\'ll just have to wait and see. I\'m pretty useless at clue gathering anyway, I get thrown off by red herrings, and I couldn\'t follow a trail if it had arrows. :-D
Really enjoyed this chapter and anxiously await more-)
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Responding to you:
\"Vegeta is going to make an effort to show Kakarott he cares for him, but remember, he really doesn\'t know how.\"
Hmm, true...but the fact that he is going to be making an effort, I think, is hopefully going to be fully appreciated by Kakarott, and I\'m going to love seeing it all unfold...I hope. :-)
I really liked this chapter. The scenes with Vegeta and Yamcha were fun. I enjoyed them, and although Vegeta\'s intent was not sinister, it was a joy to watch him messing with Yamcha. The guy needs a serious beating for being such an arsehole, but considering that Vegeta knows that this is something he won\'t be doing, then his own method of revenge is sweet enough. :-)
Pleased to see that Vegeta stood proud and showed true class when speaking to Bulma. Really love that he is determined to still play a part in his son\'s life, no matter how much this fact seemed to have surprised Bulma.
This chapter has shown Bulma in a more favourable light than when we last saw her, and although she showed signs of regret for the way she treated Vegeta, and even offered excuses as to why she had done so. I personally can\'t forgive her or Yamcha for their actions. She had many options in which to tell Veget sod sod off, and she chose one of the most despicable methods around. Still, I am glad that Vegeta is content enough in his life to be able to move on from it all, and remain on agreeable terms with her.
I was so hoping that Vegeta would tell them about him and Goku...sigh...oh well, another time maybe?
I really do love the way you have portrayed ChiChi in this story. I love it that she is actually Vegeta\'s \'champion\' whether he wanted it or not. :-)
Here\'s something that I forgot when I got all emotionally analytical in my previous post:
\"~~Pity he won\'t be staying with you. It would be interesting to see what it takes to make him scream.~~\"
Arrrrgh! Forgot about the previous taunts of this nature. Blocked it I suppose. Scares the hell out of me.
I can\'t see Vegeta taunting himself with these thoughts. Yes, I can see him having fears of this nature, him being unsure just how warped his years with Freiza had made him. But no, I can\'t see him actually taunting himself with thoughts like this. So my whole theory from the previous review has just been flushed down the toilet.
Guess, I\'ll just have to wait and see. I\'m pretty useless at clue gathering anyway, I get thrown off by red herrings, and I couldn\'t follow a trail if it had arrows. :-D
Really enjoyed this chapter and anxiously await more-)
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Responding to you:
\"Vegeta is going to make an effort to show Kakarott he cares for him, but remember, he really doesn\'t know how.\"
Hmm, true...but the fact that he is going to be making an effort, I think, is hopefully going to be fully appreciated by Kakarott, and I\'m going to love seeing it all unfold...I hope. :-)
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice keep it up
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April 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. You actually made me not hate Bulma and Yamcha anymore. Cool. I am so glad that everything is starting to mend itself back toge. Th. The gang has to stay the gang. It just wouldn\'t be right.
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, Beautiful, and all around good ^_^
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congrats on getting 100 reviews. I don\'t think that I\'ver ser seen anyone get that many reviews. Cool! This is a great fic and you so deserve it!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So sorry for the late review. ^-^
I glad to see that Vegeta has regained some of his ki, and I am also glad to see he is not giving in to those voices without a fight! ^_^
It is so easy to forget that Goku must also be suffering, I mean he must be going out of his way to try and make Vegeta happy... poor thing, Ina sna see him smile again too. (or (or read about him smiling O_o)
And is Vegeta finally gonna confront Bulma and Yamcha, I hope it will go well, Vegeta\'s got enough on his plate right now.
Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
I glad to see that Vegeta has regained some of his ki, and I am also glad to see he is not giving in to those voices without a fight! ^_^
It is so easy to forget that Goku must also be suffering, I mean he must be going out of his way to try and make Vegeta happy... poor thing, Ina sna see him smile again too. (or (or read about him smiling O_o)
And is Vegeta finally gonna confront Bulma and Yamcha, I hope it will go well, Vegeta\'s got enough on his plate right now.
Looking forward to the next chap! ^_^
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hello 1st i would like to intoduce myself my name it cat & i love anime like Yu-Gi-Oh!, DBZ, Inu-Yasha, Dot Hack, Naruto & many others. ^^ i was intoduced to this fic but a friend a mine u know \'cause she reviews ur chaps her name is crystal....any way since march 19th my comp stopped workin\ me( me(still is *cries*) so i had no internet for almost a whole month & crystal felf bad so she showed me this fic she saved to a disk so that i can read at my house & all i have to say is that I LOVE THAT FIC!!!!!!(love sick school girl ^^) i\'m not kidding i was goin\' nuts for not havin\' the net but i guess u & crystal saved my sanity so THANK U SO MUCH!!!!!! only 2 days ago did my dad get a different comp workin\' in the house hence why i\'m on this one not the one in my room. ^^ but i mean damn i love this fic to death i kept buggin\' crystal almost everday for a week & a half to see if u updated ur fic (Bonding? & Awakenings)........aaaanyywaayysss now to review thw chap ^^ will the voices ever go away? will Vegeta beat the crap out of Bulma & Yamcha? will Goku kill Dende if he does find out about what he did to Vegeta? is Trunks & Goten gonna get together since in the chap \"Fitting In\" Gohan is really the only straight one in the family will they get together?ahhh damn will i ever stop typin\' such long reviews? i\'m not jokin\' i try to write short ones but i just end up writin\' long ones......be happy that i didn\'t put how anythin\' about how big my family is or what chaos some of my friends are goin\' not just to me but to others i know ;__; damn this has been a long review sorry again ^^ talk to ya later & keep up the great work ^^