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Such a great conversation between Piccolo and Vegeta in Pissy?! I loved it, and I loved that you used it to flesh out some of Vegeta's issues. And what's this - Goku is actually jealous? It's so much fun reading through this...

That was an awsome story, off to read the sequel. Keep writting, there always has to be more! But great work, loved every moment, i think i cried when i thought goku was dead lol. I\'m such a sap. Keep up the good work!

I like this chapter the most so far, mostly because of Piccolo and Vegeta. It\'s adorable how they get along. Good job ^_^ Hope you start a trend.

Whoa.

Dude.

Whoa.

*speechless*

Dude.

Okay, so at first, I was a little unsure. The first chapter is a little shaky and QUITE misleading, but after I read it I decided to plow on because a friend who is near and dear to my heart recommended this fic. I trust her tastes completely, and so I continued.

Boy, am I glad I did.

Which isnt to say that the fic isnt without it\'s weaknesses. The constant POV changing was a little daunting, as was having to remember which little symbols were for which voices in which persons head. More than a little confusing.

But on the upside, you had stupendous characterization, exquisite dialogue, lots of details.

AND DON\'T EVEN GET ME STARTED ON THE SEX!

I\'ve read a LOT of smut in my life. Smut like you wouldnt believe, but nothing, NOTHING, NOTHING can even BEGIN to compare to this. This was HOT. I\'m talking i-need-a-cigarette-even-though-I-don\'t-smoke hot. I\'m talking three-cold-showers hot. I\'m talking I-better-move-to-Alaska-before-I-sizzle-out-of-existence hot. It was just sooo amazing. So utterly AMAZING. You REALLY put those tails to good use. *snickers* I can only envy your smut-writing abilities.

Anyway, so in the end, whatever mistakes this fic has, are made up for by plot, characterization and to-die-for sex scenes. *worships you*

Awesome. You must continue. If not then I\'ll get really upset and get really mad. This story is incredible.

Hey! Just wanted to say how amazing i though \'Maintaing\' was! I;ve just finished it and read the whole thing in one go! it\'s now....hang on....4.45am and i have to be awake for work in 2 hours but it was totally worth it! I absolutley loved your relationship between Piccolo and Vegeta (made me spit my drink out in laughter as I was reading, not once but twice!) I practically cried through most of it towards the end. I think all your fics are great and you\'re a really easy author to read. You don\'t add all the other bullshit and just....hmmmm...use the right words to poytray a particular feeling (?) I\'m not even sure if that\'s right, but it all seems to flow together nicely! I\'m moving onto \'Quest\' next but i think i\'ll read a chapter a day or something and drag it out. Kinda savour the experience a bit more (after reading \'Maintaing\' again of course!) Ooh! and i think you fic Something about Sayians is really cool...bloody sayians! Woo! thanks for writing it all!

Cheers!

Hellagoddess (love & peace!)

Your fic is the first I have read till chapter 45

THIS WAS SO EXCELLENT!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!*HUGGLES*

i usually run screaming from long fic
but i love yours
I love it! YAY VEGETA-SAMA

::blows kiss::

have I mentioned I love you lately?

Camaro

No dear, you haven\'t - but it is wonderful to hear...especially since I keep committing mush and *gasp* romance. *g*

Ahhh goddess. Just sublime. **Deep purr of Saiyan satisfaction**. Loved it beyond words. I see I have been off line so long there is a sequel to enjoy already - it's like saving up your Christmas presents. Mmmm, on to Quest...