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What did that nasty little namek do to my prince??? update soon please, I wanna know!!!

oooh, this is getting good...no wait, it is already good...it just keeps on getting better and better. I am dying to know what all that was about with Dende. It seems to me that he\'s not putting the same effort into healing Vegeta as he is for Goku. If that\'s the case, then Piccolo\'s anger is going to be nothing compared to Goku\'s. What it it is though, you\'ve got me completely and utterly hooked!

Please, please, don\'t let Vegeta\'s fear in regards to Trunks ever be realised...I couldn\'t handle that.

This is one very compelling story!

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Yaaaaaaaay! An update. Everytime I think things can\'t get any better (or worse in this case). They do. I did\'t know how the hell they were gonna get out of that last fiasco and now this. What the hell is Piccolo so pissed at Dende about? *Sigh* I guess I\'ll just have to wait til next time. I love this fic. You are great at building things up. I just know the finale (not to mention the next chapter)is going to be something. But I am getting ahead of myself. I\'m not ready for the end yet anyway. Great fic. ;)

Great chappie!!!! *scared* Uh..why is Piccolo so mad at Dende??? What did he to to the Ouji??? Gosh, I need to know! I can\'t wait until the next update. Goku is so sweet and caring...making sure his Prince gets healed...*sighs* Awesome chapter, I\'m sad it\'s over, and now I must wait again, but it\'s worth the wait.
p.s. now I am going to be thinking what could Dende have done to make Piccolo so upset...it\'s stuck in my brain! Great cliffy!
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-MB-

o0o... A cliffhanger... Update soon!!!

WOO! I just got done reading all of this...and I must say it is beautifully written. I loved it. Vegeta makes me so sad, the way you wrote his character is wonderful. This is a very deep story w/ an excellent plot. That last chap blew me away...It was very intense. Goku trapped inside the Ouji\'s mind...and time is running out...gosh..I\'m hooked, and I can\'t wait to see hveryverything is going to turn out.
I love your story! ^.*

Oh no! They shouldn\'t die!!!

Ohhhh....I can\'t wait to read what happens next. Thank for writing the 19 chapters, could you release ch.20 soon

OMG!!! The suspense!!! Update soon!!! Plz!!!

Sorry its a little late... I just have to say, I think I was about an inch from the computer screen when I finished reading this chap!
You had me hanging off the edge of my chair, and then it stopped!!!!
A CLIFFHANGER! ::grrr::
I am now waiting \'patiently\' ::eye twitch:: for the next chap. ^_^