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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i it! it!!!!i\'ve always been so found of Goku X Vegeta fics but cant seem to find many so you\'ve made my morning happy!!
PLEEEAASEEE add another chapter,i wanna read some more stuff,and think you could get a LITTLE
PLEEEAASEEE add another chapter,i wanna read some more stuff,and think you could get a LITTLE
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ack damn keyboard.........anyway,could you please put in a little more Krillin beating?that freaky bald,noseless thing.......ugh.......ok well bye and keep up the great work!!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heeee!!! ^__^ More more more!!!
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like what you have written so far. I don\'t have any critisim to give. It\'s all good. How do your muses feel about doing a bit of VxG? I doesn\'t seem to fit the story, but.......
Any way, can\'t wait to read more. I have to go now, even adults, with low paying jobs, have bed times.
Any way, can\'t wait to read more. I have to go now, even adults, with low paying jobs, have bed times.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, yay, yay! You updated. Thank goodness. I love this fic. Especially the part when Goku told Vegeta that he had a nice smile and that he should do it more often. I\'m sure he does cause everything else on Geta is just gous ous if you ask me.
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January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chap (nice lemon). I\'m glad to hear this fic has got plenty more chapters, it means i got more to read yay ^-^
Can\'t wait for the next chap ^_^
Can\'t wait for the next chap ^_^
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 was fabolous. Yes, I know its spelled wrong. I love the lemon. It was so loverly. Vegeta and Goku fics are kick ass. Ok, I am going to be mature now. The lemon was written beautifully. Not trashy or frightening in the least, unlike others that I have read. Great job. Me likey. Hey, I can only be mature for so long.
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::Sigh of contentment:: About time too. Mmm.
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January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooh. I just read the whole thing just now. Those have to be some of the best sex scenes I have ever read. Keep writing!
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January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was a nice chap, it was really sweet when Goku saved Vegeta from his dream.
And the lemas vas very nice ^_^
And the lemas vas very nice ^_^