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by Pixelgoddess

person Kakarott lover
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A truly beautiful and emotional fic... and the lemon scene in this chapter was just perfect it was erotic,tender,sensual all that a lemon should have!
person Crystal
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! You updated, and it was great! Keep it up!
person Carly
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my Goddess! You are evil! I love you! Lol jk. I love this story...probably one of the best I have read in a long...very very very long time! I hope you update soon. Continue with the angst and the love...hopefully there might be a little fluff in the furture! Ttyl!
person Shan
schedule January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::Sniffs:: My poor honey. My poor, poor honey. But hey, he\'ll have sex soon! (Nothing insightful I\'m afraid)
person SaiyajinNeko
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor poor Veggie, Onagai, ur not gonna tourture him for much longer are you? I hope not. Well can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
person Crystal
schedule January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im soo glad you updated. terribly dark chappie, lol. keep it up!
person Crystal
schedule January 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, you really need to update! Screw the reveiews, I like it and thats all that matters. Youve had over 1000 hits and the only reason people havent been writing rave reveiws is cuz they are all lazy F-ers!. lol. but really, update soon, plz!
person jay goose
schedule January 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just read like all 14 chaptand and I loved them. I only recently got into Dragonball Z, like this Christmas. My brother got me into it when I went home for the holidays. I will forever love him for that. I love Vegeta, he\'s my favorite. When I learned about his history I kinda figured that there was more to it then was revealed on the show or that my brother knew of anyway. I love your take on it. It is very believeable. I like this story because the whole thing is realistic under the circumtances. I will probably never be able to write a fic of my own. I would never be able to do the characters justice. I hope you update soon. I\'m starting to like Goku/Vegeta fics. Good job.
person Crystal
schedule January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please keep updating. I\'m on the edge of my seat here! Vegeta\'s sweet when he\'s incapacitated, lol. Dont stop writing!
person Crystal
schedule December 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! I hope thats not the end! It cant be the end! Update! Soon! Please!

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