rate_review Reviews

Hmm, the thought of Goku and a really hot snoves ves me delicious shivers, ooh yeah... Can\'t wait to see what he does to Veggie chan now! ^_^

It feels so weird, liking Chichi. But I still don\'t really want to see her and Rezu, I love my Veggie-chan too much to ignore him, even in favour of lesbian sex *sigh*. Um, are we meant to have theories about Vegeta? I just figured you know, he was abused, yada yada yada, he loved Radditz, he misses him and thinks Goku might stave off loneliness but he can\'t trust him because he\'s stronger and stuff. And I love your Blackadder references! Long live British humour! Huzzah!

Ohhhhhh i wonder what gonna happen next....hmmm I just want Vegeta and Goku to get together already but something tells me that its gonna take awhile ^_^
anyway can\'t wait till the next chap..Ja ne!

Um, you\'re not MEANT to show lemons to your family. Even if this one would make them proud. You have not embarrassed yourself with this, you have proven there are still unique ways to represent it. It was hot!
As for the Frieza thing, I think that\'s been overdone. It might be an idea to have Vegeta refer to it or think about it in passing later on, but not actually devote a chapter to it. I\'m dying to see Goku take care of his honeybunny! (Vegeta bursts through Sarkywoman\'s window. \"WHAT DID YOU CALL ME?\" So if I don\'t review the next one it\'s because I\'ve been a victim of the Gallic Gun attack.)

My poor Geta\'s in denial. Goku ought to grab him and snog him silly. That\'d solve everything, I\'m sure of it. Even the issue\'s with Freeza and not having any friends. A kiss would set him straight. Well, not straight as such...um.

Good story i like this can\'t wait till Goku and Vegeta get toghether thou they are my fave couple ever. ^_^

A nice little break, but Vegeta needs attention. I can see him jumping around like Bart in the Simpsons saying, \'Hey everyone, it\'s me! Don\'t look at the lesbian sex, look at me! Me, me, me! Why is nobody paying attenion to me!\'

You\'ve got me so badly perched on the edge of my seat any movement I make will disrupt causality as we know it. Since it\'s your fault I hope you feel guilty enough to post another part of this story to keep me entertained.

I agree with you completely,Vegeta is a million times best!!! Update soon!

It is so cool to one one where Chichi and Vegeta are friends. I\'m a little unsure as to why Krillin would risk his life by bitching at Vegeta like that, but I guess he is a thick little shit.