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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes i did the the e-mail, thanks very much ^^
wow... that\'s all i have to say really. if i could write fics like that i\'d be mup, up, but since i can\'t, i\'ll just go read the first chap to the sequel ^^ thanks
wow... that\'s all i have to say really. if i could write fics like that i\'d be mup, up, but since i can\'t, i\'ll just go read the first chap to the sequel ^^ thanks
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI! ^_^ So sorry I haven\'t been here for a while. Just got back from my trip and I had limited access to computers. Well, that as certainly rude of Gohan. Vegeta, kill himself?
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tis a blooming miracle that aff was working long enough for me to review. Now...It\'s the end. I can\'t believe that it is over but there is a sequel so I am pleased. This last chaptas sas so wonderful. I will not cry. I will not cry. Anyway...I can\'t wait for more Makoto and Kakorr and that Piccolo you promised. You should feel so proud you did...it now if I could just get around to finishing my fic. *sigh*
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July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What can I say, this chapter in itself was beautiful. The story itself was a wonderful rollercoaster of highs and lows, and kept me coming back to see what would happen next. I am happy Vegeta and Kakorr have made it through this, and are going to be stronger because of it.
(I am always happy with mind blending sex. hehe)
I don\'t have any requests for your sequil (spelling?) I just want to be along for the ride! Happy, angsty, violent, gentel, whatever, I want to read it. You\'ve done some pretty good advertising for it in your author\'s notes; I am so excited.
(I am always happy with mind blending sex. hehe)
I don\'t have any requests for your sequil (spelling?) I just want to be along for the ride! Happy, angsty, violent, gentel, whatever, I want to read it. You\'ve done some pretty good advertising for it in your author\'s notes; I am so excited.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an excellent conclusion!
Vegeta overcame his fears and Goku\'s torment is over.
Looking forward to the sequel.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God!!!! I went on a holliday and came back to a completed story!!!!. Yeah!!! Although I am desperately waiting for the sequel. The holiday explained the lack of reviewing for the last two chappy\'s. I hope you missed me. *Winks* I loved the lemon. I would die for the two bodies experience *looks at boyfriend with sly smirk* Anyway, I loved the ending, can\'t wait for the sequel.
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July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story!
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter!
Piccolo and Goku helped get Vegeta out of his self pity. I\'m glad things are turning around.
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am happy Piccolo offered to let Dende use some of his energy to heal Vegeta. I am also happy that in breaking free Vegeta burnt out the circutry. Yay! So, I noticed once again that Piccolo\'s view on the Kias and mine are very similar. I am also happy that Dende is thinking more for himself. It had to be kind of tough to be asked to be the Guardian at such a young age and not have anyone to really mentor you except some far away Kais with their own plans and skewed view of how things should be.
I liked the pep talk Piccolo had with Vegeta at the end (should I really call it that?) The Green-bean is pretty low key, taking in all of the information he received from both Goku and Vegeta and coming up with a rational reaction. (Could have something to do with Kami being a part of him.)
I liked the pep talk Piccolo had with Vegeta at the end (should I really call it that?) The Green-bean is pretty low key, taking in all of the information he received from both Goku and Vegeta and coming up with a rational reaction. (Could have something to do with Kami being a part of him.)
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ha! That damned Namek. He is so cool! Piccolo is awesome in your fic you know. Anyways, Vegeta did need a good kick in the ass though. Pouting is not becoming of a prince...even in these circumstances. Things are good Veg..yo..you got learn to enjoy them. I can\'t believe the story is almost over. I should have known you\'d beat me to the finish. I still probably got ten chapterst to go...until the sequel. But I will most definitely be looking out for yours.