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person Velvet Curse
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry i didn\'t review to the last chap, i was kinda busy, but about letting me know when you update, would you? that would be grehankhanks ^^
i loved that last chapter, it just makes me laugh the way Piccollo and Vegeta are together. It\'s something that Goku could never do for Vegeta because he could never speak to him like that but Picollo sure does have a way of dealing with him lol. i can\'t wait for the next chapter, hehe
person Sabi-san
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I agree that Vegeta would feel like shit and have a huge desire to kill himself after the whole situation. I also agree that Kakarott would try very hard to stop him and show him how much he is loved and would be missed. Very nice chapter indeed.

Makoto? Hai, that\'s what it means. There\'s also a Sailor Moon character named that... I can\'t help but think of her when I read that name. Vegeta and Makoto... ech. Anyway, it\'s a good name that conveys how Kakarott sees Vegeta. My handycap is my problem that I have to deal with, no concern of yours. ^^
person Elvenjedi
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to say that I love this story!! I was so mad when ff.net killed your account! Then there\'s something wrong with mm.org, too, I think; it only shows up to ch. 41. I was going crazy, trying to find this story and see if you\'d updated! Anyway, terrific story!! And can you send me an email whenever you add a new chapter? I\'d really appreciate it! Keep up the great work!
person Sabi-san
schedule July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah ha! I found you! Down with fanfiction.net and their stupidity! *rages around a moment* I was so stuck on this story. Had it on my favorites and all. I went back to see if you updated, and lo and behold, it was gone! Nooooo! But all is good. I found it. ^^ Yay!

person jaygoose
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was like three chapters behind. What the hell is wrong with me?! I guess you were just too fast for me these days. Anyway, I am so glad that Vegeta finally beat the crap out of that bastard Frieza. That was just the way it was supposed to be. I loved your take on Dende, by the way. And Makoto...that was so perfect. I love that pet name. I wish I had something better to say but I am still reeling from everything that just happened. Poor Veggie...

They pulled you from Fanfic.net. That site is such a load...hehe. You know just when there are writers that come along and try to give that Kami damned place some originality and crediblity they turn on them like rabid dogs. That site is full of crap...*sigh* I\'m not going on a rant...*looks around suspiciously* I might be next. My story has gotten a little adult as of late. Anyway...Fanfic sucks and you do not. Love Ya!
person Webtester01
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Wonderful!!


I\'m glad that Goku was ato tto talk Vegeta out of suicide.

Goku showed Vegeta how greatly he cared for him.


The turmoil and love was described well in this chapter.

Throughout the story each characters perssonality was counterpoint

to the other, balancing the needs of the other.


Keep up the the good work!!

person Crystal
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah, i noticed that b4 when aff was messed up i couldnt find your fic on fanfiction. whyd they kill it? did they have another ban? *hmph!* whats the world coming to when you cant even write about sex, blood, murder, and gore? lol, jk.

great chapter, yet again. i almost got a little teary eyed for a mi the there. although, that might just be the pms... lol, tmi, i know. i just like to blab.

anywho, keep up the awesome work!
person Will
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s getting so hard to track down my goddess - not on FF, I couldn\'t access AFF for ages, then found you on MM but can\'t find you there anymore - Saiyan like growl of frustration was building but AT LAST I have found you again. Wonderful chapter. True to the depths of your characters and beautifully rendered as always. I wrote you a really long review on MM but sadly my son (think Gotenks on speed) came and hassled me at crucial moment and I lost it. Never mind will do it again when I can for you.
person Macha
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Phew, that was a close one. I am glad Goku found the will to get out of bed and find Vegeta. And I am happy Vegeta has decided to give Goku the time he has asked for.

I like the nick name Goku has given Vegeta. houghough it is new to me, so I can\'t type it yet.)

So, There will be more questioned answered next chapter. Yay!
person Crystal
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Looks like I spoke too soon, its workin again. Woo-hoo! (my real review is on mediaminer.org, lol)

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