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by Pixelgoddess

person Macha
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I may be reading the wrong things into this, but it seemed as though Vegeta felt that his victory over the F\'ing bastard was hollow. I don\'t know how he can think that. , he, he has every right to feel dejected about the things that being a sleeper made him do to Goku, but his victory over F.B. wasn\'t hallow. I am just sorry there is so much pain that he can\'t enjoy it. (hehe, he toasted the reamains)

*sighs* I wish there was some way to get that damn chip out of him without killing him.

*sobs* I thought something like this was going to happen. I certainly hope that Goku can change Vegeta\'s mind. I don\'t want him to go down that road again. (refering to DBZ Majin Vegeta blowing himself up.)

Ah, so you have a plan. I am so glad you have a plan, even if I don\'t know what it is, because it means I get to read more. Yay!

Thanks for the explination of Dende\'s ablities. It sounds very plossable (Spelling?) *nods head* Seems like it could happen.
person Velvet Curse
schedule July 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh did they? i wasn\'t aware they had pulled my reveiws too *growls* anyway, i noticed that they pulled your account from thee toe too. did they bother to inform you of why? i\'ve e-mailed them every day since i reviewed that last time but they never answer. i\'m refusing to visit that site now since you\'re not posting there anymore. it\'s a good job i remembered you saying in a previous chapter that you posted here or i wouldn\'t have been able to read anymore and that would have been BAD. i\'m lucky since my best friend is a website designer and what are friends good for if not making websites for you? hehe no, i\'m in his debt eternally, or i will be once he\'s finished it. so i don\'t care if FF dropped me, their loss.
i feel so sorry for vegeta, i mean he just found someone to trust and now he see\'s himself in that way again. goku\'s going to have his work cut out for him now, especially with him still being injured. good chapter, thanks ^^
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries tears of joy* Oh yay! Goku is going to be ok! Vegeta killed Frieza! That was so awesome. I am proud of him!
And I loved how Goku encouraged him through out the fight.
And I didn\'t think that the whole Vegeta falling in love and Kakorr thing was to subt.I k.I knew. I just love that pet-name. As for suggestions...I don\'t think I have one...it would be horrible if I did. I really suck at stuff like that.
And *grabs box of kleenex* oh no...the nchapchapters are going to be rough? I kinda figured they might, with everything that happened. But I can hardly wait to read them. This was a great chap and I was so glad Vegeta ascended and got to defeat the one who had wronged him so much in life.
Oh and one of my favorite parts in this chap was when Frieza was talking about how Trunks and how he wouldn\'t be back and Vegeta\'s like that was my son, asshole...hehe I loved that sooooo much.
^.*
-MB-
person Marie
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Freiza\'s dead! Again! :D Happy day.

I\'ve always been a fan of \'Geta. :3
person ~Evil
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good, Frieza\'s dead. Finally!! And Goku will be fine. Ah. You make me happy. Now... bring up the drama again!!!
person Crystal
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been rather lax in my reading and reviewing lately. Im glad Im back up to date cuz these past few chapters were really intense. In #41 I was really gettin into it. *Go, Vegeta! Kill him! Tear him apart!* Ahem. Yes. I cant wait until you update again. Now, I must comment on my friend, the kitty cat. What is this flirting bussiness all about? How did this start? Its cute, lol.
person Macha
schedule July 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*starts chanting* \"The bastard, freak is dead......\"(Wizard of Oz comes to mind)

*hugs Pixelgoddess* I know, you said in a couple of replies to reviews that the roller coaster isn\'t over yet, but I am soooooo happy the freak is dead. And it\'s a story were Vegeta got to kill the f\'ing bastard. YAY!

I am also soooooo happy Goku is is alive. I am glad Piccolo made it in time to get him out of the GR, I just hope he makes it to the lookout and Dende in time. So, I actually never thought about it, I just let you have author\'s rights, but now that you have mentioned it, sure, I\'d like to see the reasons behind Dende having to do multipul sessions instead of just one session like when he was younger. I am fairly certain he isn\'t going to have the same mental issues healing Goku that he did with Vegeta though. Dang those Senzu plants anyway, why can\'t they produce all year long? They are certainly impartial and unbiased, you just have to go through the Koro geo get them (I think that\'s the cats name.)

I think that Vegeta going SSJ4 would have been overboard. I would have loved it, but sometimes there is such a thing as overkill..... or wait, with the F\'ing bastard you can\'t be too sure, SSJ4 would have been good. Make him a smuge mark on the ground and then fry the smudge mark to ashes.... Okay, I\'ll stop.

Gotenks/Piccolo? 0.0
person Macha
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, I would have to say that with the down time on AFF and your couple of rewrites that you did, you gave me plenty of time to stop panicing. Now all I want to do is kill that bastard Frezia. *Glares threateningly at the purple and white freak.*

Yay, Gotenks. I know Piccolo has a real problem with him, but he has his moments. Thank Kami they are only thrity minutes at the most.

I hope and pray somehow Vegeta is able to resist the freak. It seemed as though the freak may have gone too far, threatening the body of Goku. This is my thoughts on the matter, if Vegeta believes that life isn\'t worth living without Goku, he is a strong enough person to overcome any sort of pain the freak can dish out.

I don\'t know what to think of the telepathic ending :Vegeta: It could have been Goku, but it very easily could have been Piccolo trying to reach him. I don\'t know if you were trying to lead us/me astray or not with that mini cliff hanger. We\'ll find out soon enough, I am sure.

The freak is twisted and evil, what a devious plan he set in motion, only to have it work out this way instead of the way he had intended.
person jaygoose
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs* No...no...no! You killed off Goku *suddenly remembers that she just did the same thing in one of her fics* Opps...nevermind. Hey, but I didn\'t have Vegeta do it. That was so sad. I could just see the prince blubbering over his belove\'s body. That bastard Frieza! *sigh* Now on to the amusing bits. \"I should have stayed evil\"---that was hilarious. Oh and the emergence of Gotenks. I forgot how much I loved that guy. I hope things get better...or wait, how about worse. I love drama.
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! NO! nonononononononono!!!!!!!
Goku!!!!!! Please let Goku be ok somehow. And Vegeta his mental stability, I am afraid for him.
So Frieza was waiting for Vegeta to fall in love! wanting it to be radditz! but it wasn\'t! *sobs* it was Goku!!!!!!!
This is all so horrible. Frieza is ugh! I hate him, I am not sure if it is possible for me to hate him even more. Everytime he calls Vegeta pet I just want to hit him!!
Now I understand what Vegeta was saying when he was afraid ove ove and had a fear of unlocking whatever it was inside of him. What Frieza put inside of him...damn that icy bastard staright to hell.
Gosh, what is going to happen. Poor Vegeta having to go through all of this and not being strong enough to beat Frieza...and poor Goku. But maybe there is hope, if that was Goku who said Vegeta\'s name at the end. I hope it was.
I love this fic! but you know that. ^_^
and 39 was written first(I never ever would have guessed that)...wow s sos so amazing to hear how ppl create their stories.
^.*
-MB-

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