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by Pixelgoddess

person Twilight-Abyss
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You got sick, too. It seems everywhere I turn someone has the flu or something similar. I myself have a nasty cough. The kind that sounds like a dog choking (the best description I\'ve heard for it so far). Hope you are feeling better.

Story, right. This chapter was very sweet and filled me with the fuzzies. Especially the stuffed animal toting Vegeta image. Squee! Write more soon please.

~Kira~
person Webtester01
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved this chapter (35.)

You were right. I did like the baka bear statement.

I was also sick last week. I\'m still working on chapter 11. *Groans* seems like it\'s taking forever.
And with the mentals... *rolls eyes and huffs*

Anyway, check out my story Ancient History: The forgotten Past of the Saiyans, when you have the time.
It is my first fic, so review and tell me what you think.

I really love this whole story! Very original! Keep it up. :-)
person Webtester01
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops. Mentals= mental blocks.

Typo.
person macha
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, that was interesting, I was feeling calm just reading the part about Vegeta \'grooming\' Goku.

So, Vegeta has a hint about the scar now, but doesn\'t want to face the memories. And he did pretty well in accepting the fact he and Goku won\'t be joining the fight.

Yes! Two more chapies almost done, and you say you think this is going to be about 50 long? . ma.
person jaygoose
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww...*rolls around on the floor twitching like a nut case* The beginning was adorable. I feel so sad for my Veggie...er...Kaki\'s Veggie...*looked around out of fear* I hope they figure this out soon. Whoa 50 chapters. I\'m hoping to get mine done in 30 or less. yeah, right. And now a side fic is brewing. We just love writing ourselves to death don\'t we. :)
person Sarkywoman
schedule June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, angst.... I\'m glad Vegeta just sat around feeling helpless, I was worried he would go to the ship and get in the way. Not that I would ever say that to his face of course....
person jaygoose
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. I am sweating. They are so cute. I am a gushing idiot now. :)
person Crystal
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Has nothing left to say* ...Its awesome, keep it up. > Drama, drama, drama. lol
person Sarkywoman
schedule June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Vegeta is such a lovely uke. Um...nope, that\'s all my brain can think about right now.
person Webtester01
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.

I liked it when Goku used his side of the the bond to tell Vegeta he was safe.

I wonder if Freiza is talking to Vegeta telepathically from hell, or if Dende did something to him.

Looking forward to more.

I am really ejoying your story.

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