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January 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey i really like you story just one lil thing...it missing chapter 8 *pouts* so can u maybe add it or maybe send it to me. i feel am missing a majot part of the story without reading it.
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED THIS! I really hope that there is a sequel! It would be nice if Vegeta has more cubs. This story was really diffirent that is why I loved it! You are totally adding you to my newest favorite authors list. And if someone tells you that this sucks, I\'ll beat the crap outta them. But a small suggestion. Maybe you could watch your spelling and grammar cuz at times I got confused. But it was good anyway! Please continue writing! :-) ::Gives Son Grin:: -BlackTigerG2
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December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great fic . Thanks for sharing it with us.
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December 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
thanks for the review i will post the next chap soon sorry for hurting poor Geta :(.
brilliant fic, i loved the way you portrayed the characters, so different from the show you kinda made your own new world, so sad it had to end but i like happy endings, i\'m a romantic at heart =>
brilliant fic, i loved the way you portrayed the characters, so different from the show you kinda made your own new world, so sad it had to end but i like happy endings, i\'m a romantic at heart =>
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was one great read - thanks so much.
Can I just say that I think your writing would have that final polish if it was beta-read for typos, mis-spellings etc.
Cheers, eagerly awaiting whatever fic you bring out next,
Cooey
Can I just say that I think your writing would have that final polish if it was beta-read for typos, mis-spellings etc.
Cheers, eagerly awaiting whatever fic you bring out next,
Cooey
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December 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was the last one, huh? I think i\'m gonna cry, now! No more?! No more?! Awwwwwwww........anyone why doesn\'t like your fic can shove it, because it\'s amazing! and so sweet, and full of love and dedication and secur... ... no more?! Are you really, really sure? I\'ll be very very sad if you don\'t write some more, somehow!!! *cries* I love this story!!!!!
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Of, corsr, vegeta should have more babies!! A LOT more. Wonderful fic, please put up segual SOON!!!
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Your right it is sad that the story has ended.~_~
You should make another one. About the name I got no idea what you should call it. ^_~
Gomen.
And I do want you to make Vegeta have more babies! His just sounds cute with his babies!! ^_^
Any ways I love your story as always and I\'ll be waiting for the other story.
Sayonara for now!!^_^
You should make another one. About the name I got no idea what you should call it. ^_~
Gomen.
And I do want you to make Vegeta have more babies! His just sounds cute with his babies!! ^_^
Any ways I love your story as always and I\'ll be waiting for the other story.
Sayonara for now!!^_^
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww what a lovely ending, i\'m kinda sad its over. ^_^ really good story.
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December 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love Broli as the bad guy,this chara is is seldom used to my opinion.Post more soon please!!