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November 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Happy to see a new chapter, I was waiting for it!!! So the enemy is Brolly I was right... now I\'m cus tos to know how he was able to escape Frieza\'s ship...
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November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yay ^_^ More haha...i do so like this story i can\'t wait till the next chap, Ja ne!
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHY, WHY, WHY.....WWWHHYYY!!!! Why must you put cliffhangers?!?!?!? There annoying if you didn\'t know!! >_<
Please hurry on with the chapter.
I can hardly wait!
I thought you had forgatten about all of us readers!
You better keep your promise of not forgeting this story again, OK? ^_^
I LOVE THIS STORY. ^_^
Please hurry on with the chapter.
I can hardly wait!
I thought you had forgatten about all of us readers!
You better keep your promise of not forgeting this story again, OK? ^_^
I LOVE THIS STORY. ^_^
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November 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very original concept,I can\'t wait to read more.
The first chapters were Goku was taking care of little Vegeta were really adorable,my favourites!
Hurry up with the next part,I\'m impatient to see the begginning of the battle for the Saiyan throne!
The first chapters were Goku was taking care of little Vegeta were really adorable,my favourites!
Hurry up with the next part,I\'m impatient to see the begginning of the battle for the Saiyan throne!
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November 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really curios to know who is this Saiyan...Brolly perhaps?only you could tell so please update soon!!
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad that Frieeza is out of the picture and are anxious to read Goku\'s reaction about his heritage!
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
LOVE your story. and don\'t worry your english is fine it is easy to follow and read. can\'t wait to see what you bring next and i hope that our little shindou does make it sob well good luck can\'t wait for the up date
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November 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great, great, great, great, great.GGGGRRRREEEEAAATTT!!!!
PLEASE HURRY WITH CHAPTER 20. You truly made my day today.
I was so angry and then I saw 8 more chapters and I simply couldn\'t belive it.
Please hurry up with the next chapter. Please, please pretty please. (makes cute blinking eyes) ^_^
And don\'t doupt your tallent as a writter. This is soooo sweet.
Goku gets to fight to be king of the Saiyiins. Hey one question, what happen to Radditz?
Well I hope you hurry on wuth the next chapter. I can hardly wait.
Its gonna be so cool!! ^__^
PLEASE HURRY WITH CHAPTER 20. You truly made my day today.
I was so angry and then I saw 8 more chapters and I simply couldn\'t belive it.
Please hurry up with the next chapter. Please, please pretty please. (makes cute blinking eyes) ^_^
And don\'t doupt your tallent as a writter. This is soooo sweet.
Goku gets to fight to be king of the Saiyiins. Hey one question, what happen to Radditz?
Well I hope you hurry on wuth the next chapter. I can hardly wait.
Its gonna be so cool!! ^__^
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November 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
MAN!!!! THIS STORY IS GOOD!!!
It gots action, romance, a bit of comedy and the most important part...LEMONS!!! ^__^
I already read a story that you made but I forgot the name and on the review I told you I was gonna read THIS story but it took me a while to read it but I wish I could of read it sooner its one hell of a story.
Please put the next chapter on soon.
I\'ll be waiting.
^_^
It gots action, romance, a bit of comedy and the most important part...LEMONS!!! ^__^
I already read a story that you made but I forgot the name and on the review I told you I was gonna read THIS story but it took me a while to read it but I wish I could of read it sooner its one hell of a story.
Please put the next chapter on soon.
I\'ll be waiting.
^_^
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October 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Cool. I really like that, your idea is really original, well done!