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Sorry took me 4 ever to review but I am out of town right now and I was supposed to be home -_- flight schedule problems...so I am back at my cousins house on her comp! Hopefully I will be home soon...
Anyway onto your chappie!
Woot!
Great chappie although kinda sad I hope Asoreia is alright... Mythical I like that. I also wonder how she fought at such a power level if no one could survive it. Very interesting indeed. And what was Vegeta doing at the end of the chappie?????????? I NEED to know! hehe....


Oh hey how would yinz feel if I did a V/G story??? Uh...do you have to ask??? I would feel really great!!!!! Please do one please!!!!!!!!! You are a wonderful writer! *is excited*

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So the next chap is the last? I can\'t wait for the sequel to see what is going to happen with Vegeta and Goku. That was kinda emotional with that song and all. and Asoreia she should have told Vegeta of her past but I still feel a little sorry for her, just finding him and not getting to spend a lot of time with him and then he dies. I just hope Vegeta and Goku can get as strong as Asoreria, that would be cool.

Oh...gosh...no...*sobs uncontrollably* Vegeta!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*shakes fist at you* Why??? Why my precious Ouji???? *reads your authors note* Oh...you did it for the plot, then I guess that\'s ok.
*is still sad* This was very emotional chapter, but I loved it. I especially loved how you worked My Immortal in there, that was very emotional, yet beautiful. Very good idea. I love that song.
I hope Asoreia did destroy that side of her that she hated and I hope all goes well with the wishes. I know Bulma and Yamcha seem kind of nervous about all that.
He was looking at her with such hate, his breaths were ragged and labored.---This was so sad to me...I know Vegeta must have had an onslaught of emotions at this time, unfortunately hate being one of them.
“I.....forgive......you.” ---I was happy when he said this, and I hope he still feels that way if and when he is revived.
Anyway thank you for another wonderful chapter. I can\'t wait for the next one. Thanks for sayingrevireviewers rock, so do you!
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! Oh gosh....what\'s going to happen!!!???
First let me say sorry it took me so long to review...I have been so busy and trying to write my ficcies...
anyway onto your fic! This was very action packed and lots of info...and poor Goku...*sobs* please say it isn\'t so!!!!!!
So she created me. The ultimate training device.---Needless to say my jaw dropped when I rad this line...and Asoreia\'s past of how she got so powerful! It was all very brilliant! I loved it.
I can\'t wait for the next update!!! Global Destruction, that was very rad!
But not very rad for the ppl it was aimed at...*sobs* what is going to happen????
update soon...
Keep up the excellence
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I am shocked! Goku died?! Is he dead forever? What about everyone else? Very cha chapter full of surprises.
update soon.

Very cool! I can\'t wait to see Gogeta kick some butt! AI 10,000 she is great and funny.
luv ur stori

I loved this chapter!!!!!! And you\'re right Asoreia is cool enough to use Big Bang Attack! I like her. AI lI love AI 10,000\'s personality...very clearly defined...and a wonderful sense of humor she has.
Now I really want to know what Asoreia did that was so bad. This is getting soooooo good! and Gogeta! yay!

I laughed very hard at many of the lines in the story but this by far had me dying: \"I am Not a skateboard. I would appreciate you not using me as one.” --rofl that was great and I could just picture it! ^.^

Oh I also loved Vegeta at the begining of the story...very caring...he just seems very relaxed like he can just be himself around Asoreia and I love that, he is even fusing..wow! I loved when he told her, \"you are very powerful\" (I know she is) but that was nice of him to say. So is Gogeta\'s level higher than Asoreia\'s 5th level? I guess I will have to wait and find out.

Great chapter!

Oh and thanks for reviewing my fic, that was very nice of you ^.^

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Alright an update!!!!!
And the next chapter will have a battle you say??? I love fighting scenes, almost as much as I love lemons...but fight scenes are so awesome. I can\'t wait to read the next chap!
And I can\'t wait to see Asoreia fight! ^.^

“Move out of my way A-sor-e-ia.” --LoL Vegeta is funny! That was very nice to call her by her name instead of woman.

“How do we know if any of this is real, we need an attack strategy. We can’t just go in there with our balls hanging out.” --GAH!!!! ROFL!!! What a great line! I died when I read that and the lines after that too.

She could feel her muscles tense and the rage burn through her veins like acid.--The paragraph that surrounded this sentenc (and this sentence included) was beautifully written. We got some insight on Asoreia\'s rage, the stuff she thinks of to power up. It was wonderful...poetic.

“Your dad is a loser, Goten. Any fool with half a brain can see that. Bulla’s dick for a dad is a better fighter than Kakorot.”--ROFL again I died..but I am gonna have to agree. VEGETA RULES!!! I love Goku too...but Veggie is the best!

This was great chapter and so happy you updated.
I would love to see a sequel and yeah I think there would be a point and purpose to it! So hopefully I will get to see a sequel!

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Just got done reading your whole fic and wanted to say it\'s one of the most well written, interesting, and original fics I have ever read. I do hope to see a sequel from this, and hopefully you will update soon.

This is an astounding fic!!! I must berate myself for not noticing it earlier.
I am hooked, and I love the storyline, and that last chapter...Piccolo...that was good!!!! So now I can\'t wait until you update.
Beautifully written...
Keep up the excellence
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