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September 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
loved it i laughed and cried this story was fun thanks
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, brilliant, wonderful! There is not one damn thing wrong with this creepishly flawless story. The structure, the story line, the details, everything! its just all so amazing! Soooooooo…. as a result, there will be no constructive criticism because you CAN*NOT fix perfect!!
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December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been following this story for a good long while and I feel embarrassed that I didn\'t leave a review. I just want you to know I enjoy this story a lot. I love seeing into Vegeta\'s past. It\'s always a treat. I also enjoy the relationship developing between Bulma and Vegeta. I would love to read more and anxiously await your updates.
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December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nice! i like this story; it\'s very well written! please update soon!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far! The V/B relationship is going perfectly for me. Oh, and I really like how you added an OC character, she\'s cool. KEEP POSTING!
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June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn! You certainly made up for lost time! A nice long chapter and a evil cliffy! It is hard to get mad at the cliffhanger when I am sooo glad that you updated (not to mention the nice long chapter). But, I really, really, really hope that you update sooonnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really wonderfull story with just the right mix of teasing lust, serious situation, happy chat, complicity and mutual understanding and respect, funny moments, tensions, feeling of betrayal, murderous tendencies(twitch, twitch veggie twitch twitch)towards a male bitch all the regards turned in direction of yamcha(uuuh? - what a dumbass- ) repressed feelings (from both of them) ... i could go on all day but i would not be very productive of me so i prefer quit and let you take where i stopped
great job indeed
update ASAP please
great job indeed
update ASAP please
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June 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooops sorry i forgot to ask you if you could notice me when you will update
well my mail is mentionned
tnx
well my mail is mentionned
tnx
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome insight into the minds of my two favorite characters. The emotions and thoughts for bore cre completely in character and very fun to \"eavesdrop\" upon. Can\'t wait for the next chapter with Bulma and Vegeta \"facing\" off again.
BTW...I\'m not a really big Yamcha fan but I appreciate the strength in which you wrote him. A lot of people (including myself) like to write the former Bandit as a *love-sick* loser. You gave him simple pride. I like that!
BTW...I\'m not a really big Yamcha fan but I appreciate the strength in which you wrote him. A lot of people (including myself) like to write the former Bandit as a *love-sick* loser. You gave him simple pride. I like that!
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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I really like it. 's o's one of thst ist i\'ve read so far. Everyone\'s staying really in character, and that\'s just awesome. anyway, please continue! and if you could tell me when you update, my e-mail\'s next to my name!