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August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I hope you keep it going. I love Goku/Bulma pairings. Even Goku/Bra pairings. Anyone but Chi chi. lol
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To bad you never finished this.. I do love Goku/Bulma pairings *sighs*
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December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You need some help with grammer & spelling, but all & all I liked it. I liked the plot and the pairing... thats probably b/c I\'m a freaky hentai but w/e. Any way I hope you finish chapter2 and the rest of the fic. The fic could be long or short it really doesn\'t matter, I think it\'ll be great either way, and if you follow that little bit of advice it\'ll be even better. Good luck on this fic! Hurry up and you your muse, I\'ll be waitin for the next chappy.
------- Haru-chan =P
------- Haru-chan =P
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November 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It\'s a gstorstory and I like your idea, but I\'m not gonna lie to you... you need some help with the grammar. Just find a beta (there are some good ones advertising on this sight) and this story will definately be a hit ^_~