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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Muy buena idea conservar la maldad de VEgeta. Esta historia engancha. Espero que continue para poder conservar la consecuencia, todavía queda explicar ¿Cómo puede volver Trunks al pasado para avisar de los androides si lo dejas aquí? Espero que continues con el reto. S2 desde España
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT!
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April 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best DBZ fics I have ever read in my life. You are excellent writer. You made me want to hate Vegeta, but at the same time, I couldn\'t help but admire his pluck. I felt the anguish and the pain, but also the hope. I like that this story incites conflicting emotions in its readers. I want to see Vegeta get his comeuppance, but I also want to see his dreams realized. There was a sense foreboding terror of Bulma\'sominous future that I believe you captured magnificently. You just made evil Vegeta so damn... I dunno --evil--. He makes no excuses for his past, present, and definitely not his future. Please for the love of Chiaotzu email me when you write the sequel. I LOVE this fic so much!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit this story was pretty intense. (God I hate that world, they drilled it out in DBZ and it still pisses me off till this day, but it had to be used sorry ><)
It was very different the way you got both Veg and Bul together, only read a few but most go towards him changing and being nice (Not that it\'s a bad thing), so it\'s cool to find him stil the asshole he truely is.
Looking forward to the sequal, E-mail me when you have it up k?
Btw, this story ruled ^^.
Kay
It was very different the way you got both Veg and Bul together, only read a few but most go towards him changing and being nice (Not that it\'s a bad thing), so it\'s cool to find him stil the asshole he truely is.
Looking forward to the sequal, E-mail me when you have it up k?
Btw, this story ruled ^^.
Kay
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February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I realley Really Really Really like your story so please, hurry up with the sequal. I\'m lokking forward to read it
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hiii
Its a very good story so please write more........
Its a very good story so please write more........
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hey I\'m a BIG FAN OF VEGETA/BULMA FIC and I really think you have a good story here. so, PPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEE WRITE SOME MORE CHAPTERS (MANY MORE CHAPTERS......HE HE)
fx. will Bulma ever get used to a life with Vegeta? and how will it go out in the space?
I WOULD LIKE TO HEAR SOMETHING ABOUTE THAT AND IF YOU HAVE O IDI IDIERS.
I really think you should keep up the story, and I REALLY REALLY REALLY like the idia that Vegeta is still evil don\'t change that.....toooo much.
well, that\'s all for now I hope you will work on it PLEASE I GET DOWN ON MY KNEES AND BEG, JUST WRITE.
Bye for now F-chan.
fx. will Bulma ever get used to a life with Vegeta? and how will it go out in the space?
I WOULD LIKE TO HEAR SOMETHING ABOUTE THAT AND IF YOU HAVE O IDI IDIERS.
I really think you should keep up the story, and I REALLY REALLY REALLY like the idia that Vegeta is still evil don\'t change that.....toooo much.
well, that\'s all for now I hope you will work on it PLEASE I GET DOWN ON MY KNEES AND BEG, JUST WRITE.
Bye for now F-chan.
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This story rocks! I\'m so glad you decided to post another chapter. Just please don\'t make them die at the end. It\'s so disheartening to get engrossed into a good story only to have the heroes get killed off >_<
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November 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
bravo! keep it up, this is the best v/b fic ever you have managed to keep vegeta true to form. i believe this is the only fic i have read that has done that!!! feel free to e-mail me w/ updates
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November 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was soooo demented!! =O I need more!