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person Rez
schedule January 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! Trust Duo to lighten a mood and to bring Fayah around to the fact that whether she likes it or not she's coming home with them. BUt I guess the question of the hour should revolve around Une and her plan for cing ing Carter, Nylan and the imposter L2 senator. How she's gonna do it? Probably monitor them and wait until they do something stupid like try to phone the L2 guy. Then catch them all on tape. Or something to that general effect. Right? But I'm stiill more concerned for Quatre and how he's gonna get close enough to the guy to tell for sure that he's an imposter. Oh well. You'll figure soing ing out. You probably already have. And I have to agree with Kari. This series does have to be one of the best GW fics I've read. It is well planned out and has just the right amount of detail and emphasis. Good job! Keep it up!
person Rez
schedule January 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
But...but...NOOOOO!!!WherWhere's the next chapter?? Come on. I have been reading these two stories damn near religiously for the past four days. You can't just stop there! It's inhumane!! Especially when you were just getting to the torture scene. NOOOOOOOO!!!!!! Come on! Where's the next chapter? I was really looking foreward to Quatre finding out thje grand secret which would lead Trowa and Wufei to the imposter L2 leader. And then on to Nylan and Carter and then the whole "you saved the day! Thank you Gundam pilots" bit. Where is it? Ack! Please take up writing this again. I can't believe how far you are in this and have yet to finish. Please!!! I just can't get over this. I know I'm ranting but I don't care! Please post!! Please!!! I need to know what Heero and Duo do to the scum bag that almost killed Duo. Gak! Please?!?!?!?
person Kari
schedule January 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is most certainly one of the best GW fics that I´ve read here on AFF.N. It´s both exciting and extremely heartfelt. I simply adore your OC´s, especially Toby and Shane. Though right now I´m freaking out because the bad guy kidnapped Shane -.- I´m seriously worried...*sigh*...and I wanna kick that guy´s ass like there´s no tomorrow! What an a**hole!!! ~_~
*ponders a bit* I´m not entirely sure, but I don´t think I´ve seen any grammar or spelling mistakes. So far you´ve done a wonderful job on this fic and I ALWAYS love it when you update... *slaps herself* Yes...I´ve been reading your fic for a little while, but I never seemed to get around to review it >_< Bad bad me! Sorry...I usually review when I´m on FF.N. *_*
But anyhoo...I´m very excited about what´s gonna happen next and I´m very much in danger of biting my nails in fear of what´s gonna happen to Shane! *sobs uncontrollably* Poor poor Shane!!! *sniffle* Come on Duo, Heero...ANYONE!!! Save Shane from his errible fate!! Or...feel the wrath of my new frying pan! (I´m not kidding...I actually did get a frying pan for Christmas...) Well, kepp writing ´cause you´re truly an amazing author!

Ja ne, Kari aka The Girl Who´s Utterly Fascinated By Duo´s Braid

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