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by NevynSlash

person Jess
schedule August 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was not in character in the least.
person cattilee
schedule January 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was cute, I don't think they moved too fast since it was long overdue and they had liked eachother for years.
The only thing is... Piccolo doesn't have nipples.
person ROGUEFURY
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was your first lemon <<
I loath you XD I wish my first lemon was that good! You have to write a follow-up on Piccolo\'s revenge on the others!!! I <3333333333333333 That NAMEK!! *foams at the mouth* I want more Piccolo action! Us Piccolo fangirls need to spur each other on, since Piccolo nawty fics are such a rare comodity...and sometimes delicacy XD! Really hope you write a sequel to this, SOON, SO I CAN RIVEL IN THE YUMMY NAWTY HAWTNESS!!!!

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person ROGUEFURY
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WTF!!! IT CUT MY WHOLE FUCKING REVIEW>
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person Anon
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IT DID IT AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WTF!!! IT CUT MY WHOLE FUCKING REVIEW>
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person ROGUEFURY
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG IT DID IT AGAIN!! WTF!!! IT CUT MY WHOLE FUCKING REVIEW>
LATER.ROGUEFURY
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY FUCKING SHIT! WTF IS GOING ON WITH THIS FUCKING SITE TONIGHT!! AGAIN, IT DID IT FUCKING AGAIN ;-; IT FUCKING HATES ME >< WTF!!! IT CUT MY WHOLE FUCKING REVIEW>
LATER.ROGUEFURY
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! *STABS COMPUTER* WTF!!! IT CUT MY WHOLE FUCKING REVIEW>
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person WhiteDog
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the E-mail. I didn\'t mail you back because I don\'t want my mailbox to get clogged with junkmail, you never know what might trigger it, and it\'s happened to me so many times and I\'m sick of changing my E-mail address, so.. I wouldn\'t have known it was your first lemon, trust me, MY first lemon was bad!!^-^ The antenna-thing was really funny, yet sexy. I must use it sometimes>:)... Oh and the part where Chichi walks in and thinks \'He\'s so grounded\' was fuckin\' HILARIOUS!!XD!! OMG I just laughed my ass of, all my classmates just looked at me and were like \'What the hell is wrong with her??\' hehehee.. About the posting, I post here and on fanfiction.net, the latest chappy to bre breakout is there \'cos it refused to upload here hmph-_-
White Dog
person WhiteDog
schedule November 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OK I have to say one thing: the part where Roshi kidnaps Piccolo, I mean, I just cried. I literally cried of laughter. I don\'t think it\'s healthy to read the rest of this^-^

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