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for The Torment

by AMCM

person AMAZED
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! YOUR STORIES ARE SO CAPTIVATING! THEY ARE JUST SO GOOD. YOUR A GREAT WRITER. GOD HOW YOU DESCRIBED THE STRUGGLE BETWEEN TO TWO...MY EYES WERE POPPING THREE TIMES THEIR NORMAL SIZE!
person Bulma
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY SHIT! THAT WAS AMAZING! I totally loved this fic! PLEASE TELL ME THAT YOU PLAN TO CONTINUE THIS! MORE MORE MORE MORE!
person Rise of Phoenix
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This a wonderful story. I really do enjoy all of the work that you do, but this unique perspective on Goku has to be one of my favorites.
person Macha
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, it looks as though it has been a while since you wrote this little piece. Just wanted to say that I found it creepy and fasinating at the same time. You did a wonderful job.
person Celipa
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve always loved fanfics about Goku\'s split personality! This was very moving, and I enjoyed every bit of it. ~_^ Keep up the awsome work! I hope that there will be more of this fic.
person Tairyn
schedule November 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
me likey, me likey!!! although I favor Vegeta anytime lol
person Mo
schedule November 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I had to admit I was a little apprehensive whether to read this story or but now I\'m glad I did. It presented an very unique side to the dealings Goku/Kakkarot had gone through and I like it. The story showed an side to Goku that hadn\'t been done before, and it fits quite well.

I\'m definitely going to be keeping an eye out for any work of yours and hope you will do more soon. You\'re an very good writing.

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