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boy this story after you read it you need a cold shower...lol...well written and i like the way you go from one couple to the next...at this rate you should never have writers block...please update soon...maria

mmmm..interesting update A.S.A.P

I realise that the theme of this fic is the whole primal urges induced by the fullmoon and I admit I liked the first chapter a lot, but then the second chapter came and used to many of the same things as the first. By the third chapter it was downright predictable. Why does every one of them send enticing images to their mate on the exact same day and all at the same time forgetting that there was to be a full moon later that night. What, every one of them was just feeling amorous that night? I don\'t buy it. And why must there be a flashback to explain that the female of the chapter had been teasing her mate with graphic images? Even the insertion of the tail into the female became predictable.

I know you have more creativity in you than that. I am certain if you bring down the predictability (predictable=boring) you will get more reviews. Take this anyway you want, but I want to see you improve. C\'mon! Kill the repitition and shake things up with something fresh and new.

I like this fanfic I\'m a big Goten and Bra, and Trunks and Pan, and Vegeta and Bulma, and a Chichi and Goku fan.

i dont know why but this is the only videlxgohan fic i like. maybe its because you portrayed them as being young and not so..well old thinking as some other fic\'s have them.

Very good cha. Se.

Wow. That was good, could have been a little more descriptive, but, meh. Still good. Actually, I knew that it was a gohan/Videl fic b/c you said that she \"flew up into the air\" and since I didn\'t think Bulma or Chichi have mastered the art of flying yet, I knew it was Videl. I really liked it and hope to read more.

You gave it away when she flew :P I think this is sorta OOC, but I\'m glad someone else sees Gohan\'s saiyan side. He never lets it out enough :)

GOHAN?!?!? GOHAN?!?!?! Prissy sissy mama\'s boy Gohan?!?!? O_O oookaay. Ya forgot, Gohan don\'t train nomore