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as always this chapter rocks :)

i love the way you\'ve moved from heero, duo and wufei\'s relationship(s) to quatre and trowa\'s- poor q!!

i\'m not very good at writing constructive reviews, though I\'m sure you\'ve noticed that by now :) so i hope this non-cconstructive review is okay

Update soon and keep up the great job!

Fabulous!! I adored it!

Hehehehehehehe
I'm so glad I'm not on Center. ^_^
I'm so glad I'm not Wufei, all these strange things organizing themselves without any rythm or reason.
Dragon's Lair hehehehehehehe.

that was a fantastic chapter, i love it. poor wufei, all confuzzeled about his feelings towards duo. lol. i cannot wait for the next part.

So Wufei is falling for ol Maxie. Sigh...I see an abusive relationship in the making. I feel sorry for him. All Duo does is call in name, tear at is pride and insult his intelligance. Sooner or later its going to destroy our stubbon dragon. He hasn't had an easy life too and these allies of his are pretty much just as bad as the Scurge, using him for their own agenda while always bellitting him and his worth. Its almost too hard to read. No one gets put down as much as Wufei. No on. I mean everyone is getting insulted but with the other, we are quickly reminded of their true worth, unlike with Wufei. So far I can't see a 2x5 being healthy, unless Duo starts feeling something besides bitterness, spite and hate. So right now I am all for the 1x5. You do them so well, and they are so well together because of the way you write them. Even in this fic. The silent conversations and conformation of each other. Heero picking him out before the others. Though, it might mean he thinks Wufei is the most expendable. Who knows... I'll just have to read and see. ^_^ Besides the loop of Wufei insults, the story is really a great read. The characters are full and round. The dialouge is witty, and the whole story is so orginial, I suggest you change the names one day in the furture and publish this, not as fanfiction but as your own orginal work!!

I am really excited for the beginnning of 2x5 I can't wait to read more on it... I can't wait for next week... I was really excited over 2 weeks for this chapter... its annoying... Alright, happy writing

With weapons like those, I *doubt* those are fairy godmothers... And I'm surprised that Wufei hasn't realized that Svale's been manipulating him to make him ln ton to Duo. *Grins* Or I could be giving Svale too much credit and she's really just using every chance she can get to try to grope 'Fei-fEithEither way is extremely amusing to watch from the sidelines. I can't wait for the next part! Oh, and *why* do I have a feeling Hee-chan knows more about Scources then the others do? My mind could just be playing tricks on me again, but I've got this hunch... well, we'll find out eventually if I'm right or totally off-base, heh.

Whoa! Hell of an update! This was definetly worth waiting for! The "Scourge" is really utterly ruthless, but I am sorry that we had to force Duo to relive his pain all over again. Nowcan can really see why he took the steps that he did in order to kill him. It must have been terrible to watch your whole race of people die. Not to mention the one pereson that really mattered to you to have them taken away must be just as bad. Now I hope that they will all be willingly to give Duo a chance because something tells me that things are about to get worse. Keep up the good work!

that was a beautifully dark chapter. i loved it!!!! chapter 33 rocked!!