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*Mutters* Nothing sad or angsty my arse! What do you call THAT?! *Points at chapter 33* I'd call that angst! Major angst, really! Er, not to say I'm *complaining*... you figure you're in for something angsty when dealing with the death of an entire race with only one left to get his revenge... but... wahhhh, that was *really* sad! And chibi-Duo was cute... though I do wanna kill Svale now. Well, not *kill* but... maim... Will the next chapter be coming soon? Or soon-ish? ^^' 'Cause I'd like to know what happens next. And find out why Quatre went all wobbly and stuff when he heard that the Scourge was the 13th Source. Post more soon, 'k? Please?

Wow! Duo's memories are intense. Keep up the good job and update soon!

Damn! Memories of the Dead is an incredibly powerful chapter. Reliving the destruction of your entire race, in front of an audience.

Your story is very interesting and intriguing but while i was reading, i just thought, while Duo has extensive knowledge concerning Juusan as an enemy, Wufei is the only one among them with knowledge of Juusan as an ally and the only one who has had up close and personal contact with Juusan, and the chance of playing on that knowledge is fast retreating.
If you play on Wufei's knowledge and his reactions to sharing, you could wreck interesting havoc on the slim balance between toleration and complete chaos. Not to mention whee she shield comes down Juusan has access to Wufei again, right?? Is he a walking time bomb or what. . .
Please finish this, it brightens my day.

chapter 32 was an awesome chapter and i cannot wait for the next one. your story is magnificant. a really jewel :D i am totally in love with it and i cannot wait for more.

Wow. This is an amazing story. It's just... wow. The detail in it is incredible!! I'm totally hooked.

Yeay, I like this story! But Heero being forced into a graphic realization of life's worth... I do not envy him that migrain.

Wow! Another great chapter! Update soon and keep up the fantastic, no amazing job!

Wow! Great to see this one finally updated! (though i think the wait was worth it. I enjoyed 'The Arrangement' quite thoroughly.) I'll be checking back for more, can't wait to read it!

i\'m not sure if you did it on purpose or something but in case you didn\'t know already... why do you have two \"Justice\" chapters? are they different from the other or something or is it just a bluper?

and what is heero exactly? he knows tons of stuff that others have to train years to know and yet he still does not understand some of the simplest things in life?

~ Neko-chan911 =3