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this story is very good i know you did a good job on this story i understand it is very hard to write a story so i want to give you some advice and that is to think from you heart about what you want your characters to do in this story cause if you think with your mind you don\'t have the insperation but if you think with your heart the insperation will come so the next time you write a story think with your heart and not your mind.

thanx u