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April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...just...wow...that was such a great story! This is one of the best stories i\'ve read in a long time. Doing it from Vegeta\'s point of view made the story really interesting cause well you know you see everything as it happened to him. It would be really cool if you did another one from Bulma\'s point of view to see how she percieved it. This was a fantastic story and a really good read. Keep up the great work!!!!
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April 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
It was sweet and loving. Better yet, nobody was out of character. Considering that Vegeta is anything but sweet, that is quite an accomplishment!
It was sweet and loving. Better yet, nobody was out of character. Considering that Vegeta is anything but sweet, that is quite an accomplishment!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story
its one of the most beautifully written stories ive ever read on here
i cant wait to read more of ur work
its one of the most beautifully written stories ive ever read on here
i cant wait to read more of ur work
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February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its wonderful.
I like how you have Vegeta changing slowly over time. I even like the 15 to 20 years bit -- it seems appropriate for him.
Bulma is patient but not weak in this story.
It is so good I have read it twice and still end jud just as much the second time around.
Thanks for a great story.
I like how you have Vegeta changing slowly over time. I even like the 15 to 20 years bit -- it seems appropriate for him.
Bulma is patient but not weak in this story.
It is so good I have read it twice and still end jud just as much the second time around.
Thanks for a great story.
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January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God, your fic was phenomenal in my eyes. I laughed and cried. You captured Vegeta so perfectly! I CRIED! It has been so long since a story has made me cry.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... thats so sweet!!!!!! ^_^_ ^_^_ ^_^
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful, i nearly cried ^_^
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What to say, what to say? This is what a B/V fic should be!! It\'s believable, real, full of emotion, and it portrays the B/V relationship as it should brtrartrayed: normal! I mean, Vegeta grew soft when he met Bulma, yet there are so many fics that involve Bulma being raped or something like that. Your fic tells Bulma and Vegeta\'s story as I\'ve always wanted to see it told, and I thank you for writing it. Keep writing please!
violetbura
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED this!
You were true to the original timeline, while adding enough of your own story to make it interesting, lovely, touching and very HOT! Great job getting inside Vegeta\'s head. Many liberties are taken with Vegeta\'s character, I loved how true to character you kept him.
I also enjoyed the length of each installment. It seems sometimes a reader is just \"getting into\" a story and the chapter ends. Each of yours was a story within itself.
I am a true-blue Bulma/Vegeta fan and I think this is truly one of the more superior ies ies written about them! Great job!
Caralin
You were true to the original timeline, while adding enough of your own story to make it interesting, lovely, touching and very HOT! Great job getting inside Vegeta\'s head. Many liberties are taken with Vegeta\'s character, I loved how true to character you kept him.
I also enjoyed the length of each installment. It seems sometimes a reader is just \"getting into\" a story and the chapter ends. Each of yours was a story within itself.
I am a true-blue Bulma/Vegeta fan and I think this is truly one of the more superior ies ies written about them! Great job!
Caralin
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December 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect! Absolutely Perfect! I lvoed it! Great work!!! I wish ther was more writers like you...but oh well. ^_~