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December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I saw this story and didn't want to read it because of the pairing. But I took a look at it at 2am in the morning and holy crap it's hot! Yamcha makes a suitable uke for Vegeta, perfect to dominate and he's so submissive. I loved it! Better than I expected. Please write more, you have a lot of talent.
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November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Overtones"? Fuck that! That was more d/s than most people bother to put into thir damn bdsm fics, and better. Seriously, this is some hot shit, I have read it multiple times (yeah, I have no life) and it continues to be ridiculously hot. I wish shit like this happened to me.
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January 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Laina you stupid, STUPID FUCKING MORON!!! HOW STUPID CAN U GET!!??!?!?!?!?!?!? there was a WARNING yamchaxvegeta and sex warning in the beginning of the text u STUPID FUCK!!!!! GO DO US ALL A FAVOR AND JUMP OF A CLIF U ILLITERATE FUCKING WHORE!!!!! BURN IN HELL!!!!!
ok but i liked the story very much please write more :)
ok but i liked the story very much please write more :)
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December 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ohh my, i liked that very much, please tell me that there is more to come i must have more of that sweet shit, oh yea.....hehe this has lots of great potenial to become a story not just a one shot, plz say u\'ll consider it.
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December 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yuck, you should warn people if it\'s going to be yaoi, especially if it going it\'s be Yamcha and Vegata!!!!! That sucked!!! Why do people even e the that stuff????!!!!!!
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December 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad you decided to post this here.Took you long enough.Man I love this fic,and this pairing!It\'s sooo underestimated,and I just love these fics where Vegeta makes Yamcha his bitch #drooooool^-^ ^-^ Oh and if I may recommend another excellent VxY one-shot, go to the Sayan Hideaway.It\'s called Brand new lover by Saiyjin Raven,you have to check it out!!
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Very original ^_^ You have a great writing style! I hope you don\'t mind me asking, but do you only write yaoi or do you do regular pairings too? Call me boring, but I like the old fashioned B/V and it would be pretty cool to read one from someone as imaginitive as you. Great job
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December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah! I normally prefer my Vegeta to be dominated, but that was so good!