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January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you did an excellent job introducing the situation between the two characters. even if the setup is routine (pan feeling unappreciated, trunks realizing he likes pan), the delivery is far better than most of the stories i've read. all in all, great job. i expect the same of the oncoming chapters. :)
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August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11. Good stuff. LOL. I love the way you have portrayed Trunks. He is rather protective of his family, friends, and business. LOL. I'll keep reading now.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good. Now, where's the next one?
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok. I just finished two more chapters. Trunks is arrogant. Pan is rather tough. Huh. I guess I'll learn more as I read.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like your writing. To try and pinpoint what I like about your writing I can't say. Then again I only just finished the first chapter. I'll look some more into your writing. Though, the whole having to use the bottom scroll button makes my head hurt. Can you fix that? Any way. I want to read more of your fics. So keep it up.
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BATCH: 070/05/ZY369
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters please?
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?