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January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Update soon
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January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is my absolute favorate fic at the moment! Just when I thought it could get any better, when it couldn\'t be anymore outrageous! It dose! But, you have to watch for for simple mistakes like this \"Mark pushed past he wand walked \" reread a few times before you post!
-Raditz
-Raditz
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January 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are so evil to Mark and trunks I love it! Vegeta\'s mlingling is priceless! Freaking hysterical I love this story so much, hardly an error to boot, I notices a few minor errors but really all you need is to re -read, or a beta. I hope you have more of the Z gang in this story you know cameos and such.
Get the next chapter out allreay what has it been? a minute since I read the last one? come on!
-Raditz
Get the next chapter out allreay what has it been? a minute since I read the last one? come on!
-Raditz
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January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, how...sweet? update soon
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve only read chapter one so far but I\'m liking the feel of this story. The frist interaction bewtween trunks and pan was great, the shifting of there eyes, communication threw body lauguage! My only complaint is that it seems to move to fast.
on to chapter two!
on to chapter two!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Trunks,\" Goten finally broke the male silence \"We are going to die here, aren\'t we.\" Goten looked over at Trunks.
bwahahaha! I could just picture goten hidden by all the bags! Very funny!
watch out for simple mistakes klike this one when writing \" change in her angrier\", I\'m assumming you ment anger.
now fro chapter four!
bwahahaha! I could just picture goten hidden by all the bags! Very funny!
watch out for simple mistakes klike this one when writing \" change in her angrier\", I\'m assumming you ment anger.
now fro chapter four!
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January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So when willl we be getting more? Ilove hou pou potray all the characters they just all fit! I love a mean Vegeta like bura! oh and marron aught to be fun! Hey will we ever see any of grandpa Goku and grandma chi chi?
Vegeta is hilarious in this story, i can\'t wait for more of his medeling, poor veggie didn\'t get to tell his woman the big secret! *snickers*
Vegeta is hilarious in this story, i can\'t wait for more of his medeling, poor veggie didn\'t get to tell his woman the big secret! *snickers*
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol...update soon
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December 27, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love it very good update soon!!!
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December 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That sux =/ Update soon pLease