rate_review Reviews

o..m..g how could you say this is crap?! this is like one of the best fucking beyblade stories i\'ve read! for reaaaaaaaaaaal...dude...it was the bomb...and the sequel was really good aswell! curious as to what you have up your sleeve..hmm

......that was a bit scary

Ah, just thought I would drop in with a review, since this story rocks.

And speaking of your story, you said you weren\'t too sure about Asians length. To tell you, I\'m born Asian, so I\'m current 159cm, that is 5.3

And as far as i know, I\'m not either tall or short, but all Asians have their differences.

Cat Helper

Umm....okaaaay.......uh......well........yeah. ^^ I really liked this in the beginning, but towards the end, it kinda\'......how should I describe this? It was like having cold water thrown in your face while your world it turned up-side down. Yeah. Or something like that. And then the last few \"paragraphs\" semed to turn the world back over again, in a way........or maybe that\'s just how I saw it, since Mom told me to get off of the computer and go to bed last night and I had to wait until this morning to finish the last chapter. *glares at her mom* .....not that the story wasn\'t still really enjoyable, because it was......I just wasn\'t expecting an ending like that. Ever. Like in-a-million-years type of ever. If that makes any since at all.........so, yeah. *just finished watching Full Metal Alchemist and is kinda\' out of it* (which is one of the best shows I\'ve ever seen, just fyi.......that, and Fruits Basket. They both rock. ^___~) ...sorry \'bout this....... ^^ Anyway, I still think that this was really good, and I\'m going to go read the sequel now......and yeah, I probably misspelled lots of stuff, but I\'m too tired to care much right now, so once again, I\'m sorry...... ^^ I hope that the sequel isn\'t a lot of Rei/Mai (is that how you spell her japanese name? I dunno.......hmmm.......*shrug*), because I think that Rei and Kai fit together much better (no bad pun intended....no, really) .........okay, I\'m making no sence what-so-ever, so I\'m gonna\' shut up now............bye! *wanders off to find coffee* ^___~ Oh! I almost forgot! ^___^ Keep up the good work -- you\'re really creative, and I thought that parts of this were absolutely halarious!!! (gives up trying to spll that word correctly) .......gods, do I need coffee.............................

I liked more this version of the chapter 11... It explains why Kai did all that... And it was the thing of Pink Nightmare! *cheers* Yay! you can use it whenever you want it! (I said it well? Damn my cheesy english...) *DS with extra dosis of sugar* I\'m so happy! ahem... anyway... I liked this version of the chapter, the descriptions are pretty good... but oh well, I liked it

I must say, this time round the chapter was infinitely better. And the first time round it was pretty damn impressive! Gppd job though, going into Kai\'s mind like that. And moreso, I love how you fucked up Rei\'s mind. Thinking that he deserved it, even though he blatently didn\'t is a very nice touch.

I definatly like the changes to the last chapter. It fits the sequal better because in this version Rei has been subjucted to more therefore would be more broken. I always thought that Rei was too broken in the sequal for the first version of the rape chapter. This version also explains how Rei got the bruises on his arms and shoulders...which the other version didn\'t.

I LOVE how you protraited Kai going into his mind and basically re-living the shit that he went through in the Abby, which is why he\'s raping Rei. He goes from pissed Kai, to creepy Kai and makes Rei believe that he deseverded what\'s happening to him, which most rapists do (not that I know from personal experience though).

All and all I love the changes. As I\'ve already said it fits so much better with the sequal. And you kept the anal probe! I feel so loved!

~ YuukiSan & NinjaMouse

P.S Pregnant M&M\'s...pregnant Rei!

I like this version better than the oher version. but the other one was good too! I\'m waiting for the next chappy to kiss me, kill me. . HURRY!

I reader your story I love the begining not too sure that I like the ending. But still it was very good I my friends and I couldn\'t wait for you to finish this story. And now that is finish I can really say it was Great. Hope you do more story like this one.OOOOOOOOOOOOOO..........KKKKKKKKKKKKKKK.Good ^-^
Your Fan,
Silver Rose Fox
a.k.a
Foxxy.^-*

OoOoOoOoOo!! YOU EVIL!! XDDD You are SOOOOOO MEAN!! Hahahaha!! But so gifted!....ANOTHER REASON I should HATE YOU!!! BUAHAHAHAHA- *hack hack* ahahaha- *caugh caugh* haha- *wheez wheez*..Ok ok -__-..I\'m gonna stop that before I kill myself! *dies* X__X...Nah just kidding! ^__-...Really great last couple chapters by the way! Even with Kai\'s fucking violence-enhances-blow job! XDD...Can only imagen how bad that would hurt!! ^^;;...Heh...Yeah..I really did like this story! ^_^...Sorry I could review EVERY chapter!! *dies again* X__X....But I could never get on the damn site -__-......To many parents running around the house with their stupid rules!!! X____X...*sighs* Oh well!! ^__^...Im off to see if ya got...*already forgot the neame for it* ><....Jeez.....Your sequal to this none the less!! ^^;;;...Heh.. yeah....Not Im just rambling! But what the heck..I\'m sick and I havn\'t slept for four days!! What can ya expect!? *looks like shes a robot on coffee* O________O......Hehehe..J/k...Well see ya!! ^__-...You\'ll be seeing me quite soon!!!

CIAO!! ^__^
-Cd