rate_review Reviews

"Grrrrr ò.ó asshole! Don't hurt Goten! I hate you!" That's what I was yelling at Trunks between chapters of your fic xD and of course, with the accident at the end I was desperate something bad would happen, but I remembered this fic was supposed to have a continuation and got calm. Now, about the ending... oh no, you didn't get Goten pregnant did you? =___= I hate m-preg, but I guess I'll have to read the continuation, 'cause I loved this one.

OMG!!!! I LOVED IT! i told my friend to give it a chance but there was no listening to me but i finished it and loved it. it wasnt something stupid like oops im sorry for falling on you. it was something that was planned out and creative something that you made your own world it was completly your own story (with the exception of DBZ characters) i love how you put a little japanese in it (i learned japanese just for this purpose) i hope you do more i love DBZ i grew up wathing it and this made my day (or night what ever lol) plz email me if you ever write any more. bye for now!

p.s. what did trunks mean by the soon enough part???? how can they have a baby or does trunks have a secret baby ooooooooh i must know plz make a second part it would be awsome and greatly appreciated

*sniffs* this was such a beautiful story!! *sobs* Oh, yes it was wonderful!!

I love this story! It is really sweet the way you wrote out Goten's pain he had been carrying with him all of those years. I love Goten's daughter aswell as she really shows you his innocence.

Also I really liked the way you portrayed Trunks' feelings towards Goten and why he was having to hide to them. I really felt sorry for the guy. In the end it is all happy, I'm glad they sorted things out. Check out my story!

Chibi_Goten

This is the best Goten and Trunks story I\'ve ever seen. You are a great artist. I can\'t wait for the next chapter

ahhh! i hate when the end comes! and what a cliffhanger at that! i hope you continue the story.

My god girl you have definate skill! I absoulutly love this story and i\'m only on the sixth chapter. This one is definatly my favorite fan fiction tale ever!

THAT WAS GREAT!!!! I loved your fic sry mry much that I wish idntidnt end but I can live with a happy ending!! Cant wait to read your next one!

GAH!!!! *he facevaults* DAMMIT!!! YOU CAN\'T DO THAT!!! YOU EVIL, EVIL, *EVIL* AUTHORESS!!!! *he cries* NO MORE ANGST!!!! MORE TRUTEN!!!! MORE FAMILY KAWAIINESS!!! MORE MORE MORE!!! *he immediately calms down* Ok, I think that\'s enough for now. Get the rest out soon, please.

Work, love, and dance,

Goruda Shiro