rate_review Reviews

nice dude

All I can say now is that I want a popcicle......or something like it ~.^ Great PWP, my only....not complaint....what is the word... note. I\'ll use note, My only note is that it didn\'t seem as if Vegeta were uncomfortable with the attentions of his mate for Frieza related horrors, but more like he didn\'t want to share his relationship with anyone that he didn\'t know. I guess for a brief instant it seemed as if he were ashamed. I\'m not saying that he was, but for a very brief instant it seemed like it. Anyway you are a very talented author and I have always enjoyed your stories and I\'m sure that in the future I will continue to drool over them. Love ya babe!

huh... well, I suppose I liked the very ending bit of humor.. that was good. I guess I just dont like one shot fics even in the least, though you do have a good flow with words and a formidable vocabulary to boot. I really just dont get the point of this is all and I think your real talent shows through when you dont waste your time on literary fantasies and actually just write a story. I think thats when you shine through because you can develope plots better than I\'d say most people can even if they dont always suit my tastes. I\'d say, get back to writing on your epics, I hear they\'re wonderful. Cant say much about this, I didn\'t like it but I can see your talent in it and thats all that really matters.

Camaro

\"I just want to keep in practice.\" ~Heen. Yeah, would hate for that skill to go to waste.

and that last line, about the stocking... \'filling the stocking\' Oh. I have a bruise now from falling out of my chair. I hope you\'re happy with yourself! *is still giggling over that one*

Good stuff. Good stuff.

*flits away now because she is reading during the time she generally writes ficcies herself and Poor *straight* Vegeta is in the middle of a fight with Bulma.*

I like it, I like it!
~Card

Hey that fic ruled! Was it only 915 words? wow, great!
From the description i expected it to be exactly the same as \"Food fetish\" but i was pleasently surprised - great fic!
Also, the bit where vegeta didnt like goku to do that in public was interesting, and relating it back to an incident with freiza was fantastic! That is exactly the same plot idea i use for \"A Saiyan\'s Love\".
Keep up the good work! I really like your fics, especially this one ;) maybe you could remake it with a lot more words? I know this can still be improved (even tho its already fantastic), and without a limit this can go even further! Woohoo

*drools* Who wouldn\'t wanna fill his stocking! *purs* Great story.

YUM!!!! that was great! Goku and Vegeta are the hottest. I think I drooled when you described Vegeta sitting there on the beach all bronze and oiled...delicious!