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It was pretty cool, the last part was funny ^^

hjk

very good and very funny at the end lol....heheheh...sand in the ass

lol i seem to be reviewing all ur fics hehehe
this is great too! you got a blooming talent for these short vegeta/goku fics, they rule! i luved the bit where gokdnt dnt give a care about what could happen, he just wanted goku to fuck him - that was great.
and so was this: \"I know Krillin told you to \'go pound sand\', but I don\'t think he meant in my ass!\" that was hilarious!!! Great humour! Keep up good work before i run out of fics of yours to review! hehe :D

woah, i really liked \"pound\", it\'s, overall, much better than my stuff, though not as...detailed as i\'d like. maybe you could take a look at my pwp story \"the hidden chain\", it\'s the first thing i\'ve ever posted on any story site, maybe i could get some pointers, the meanies on the site keep giving it a rating of 3, is it not long enough? or too long...oh well, thanks for reading my \"review\" and pay no heed to lil\' ole me...

Awwww.. Poor Goku got sand up his ass.. lol But I really enjoy this story. Alwats was a fan of Goku X Vegeta pairings.

I loved it! Vegeta is so sexy...like when he says Kakarotts wearing too much clothes...very nice line I loved every bit of it!