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for The Desolo// The Abandoned

by Kimera

person tyleet88
schedule September 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hi yaaaaa :D I really hope your going to keep up this good fic, you want to know why?................. IT'S DAMN GOOD!!!!!!!! so plzzzzzz,.. pretty plzzz keep going and update soon...:D hugs
person tyleet88
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update...what happens next.....?
person Tai Starr
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i totaly love this stroy! I can\'t wait till you finish it. XP and i tried to find the pic of desolo duo but I can\'t find it. lol...hurry and finish it. i\'m dying to know what happens.
person Vertigo
schedule February 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"Thanks to all my reviewers.
Oh, and a note about the demand for 1x2
I have a plan. Do me a favor and put a little trust in me. ^_^\"


Oh, that\'s too bad that this is going to be another 1x2 fic or a threesome (which Noin would be just as entitled to be in as Heero). Just about every GW is 1x2x1. That\'s one of the main reasons I grew bored and stopped reading them. I was just giving this one a try because I like Zechs. Oh well, that\'s what I get for not being one of the masses. Don\'t mind me. Unlike the 1x2 complainers I don\'t have the audacity to tell authors what to do. I just jump ship. Have fun.
person Roz
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been enjoying \"The Desolo// The Abandoned on Adult Fanfiction. I don\'t want to wait for new chapters, but could you please use a spellcheck program on your work before you release it to us? Typos stop the flow of words, and break the mood you\'re trying to create.

Could Zechs order Duo to be Owned by Heero? It could be presented as a way to secure Zechs\' happiness, since he feels that Heero and Duo should be together. A problem with this could be that Duo might still feel he had to protect Zechs, which would be difficult from a distance. Okay, could Zechs order Duo to *completely* turn his Ownership to Heero, love and all?

Thank you for sharing your work with us.

Roz
person Jander
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Please!!! Please do another chapter!!! This is an excellent story!!! I Love It!!! Thank You!!
person LEEMAX^_^
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I STILL FEEL THIS STORY NEEDS TO BE A 1X2. I THINK THAT AFTER THAT TALK WITH RELINA HEERO SHOULD GO INTO A MENTAL WARD BECAUSE HE NO LONGER CAN HANDEL LIFE. PLEASE THINK OF A WAY TO GET RID OF THE IMPRINT ON DUO TO ZECKS. I WILL ALWAYS BE FOR HEERO AND DUO. 1X2 1X2 1X2 1X2 1X2
person WC
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Heero! He must be so depressed! I would have shot myself long ago if I was in that situation...
person wingedkitten
schedule July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story--poor duo. although i can\'t see zechs holding out long. are you going to continue the story?
person Staria
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story alot. It\'s a nice change form the usual fics. I love the concept of decodecolos but it pains me at the same time. i hate seeing the biys suffer and yet i constantly am drawn to their angst.... i love the design you came up with for duo\'s desolo form too. so fiting of the shinigami. I can\'t wait for more

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