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for My Pet Saiyan

by Hecate

person Sarie
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still a fan, but I\'m not sure where your goning with this story.
person jaygoose
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve said it before and I\'ll say it again...I love this fic.

The interaction between Zarbon and Raditz is wierd but cool too. That\'s a train wreck waiting to happen.

Can\'t wait for the next part.
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! What\'s this I see...*rubs eyes* Can it be true an update!!! *does a happy dance*
This was a great chapter, very interesting...everything is still very mysterious. I have no idea what is going on, well I did have one idea, but I am not so sure now.

The boy thrashing about on the bed looked so small now, so defenseless, at times Raditz found himself forgetting that his Prince was still a boy… a 6 year old boy.--That line really says a lot to me. Little Vegeta the Prince of Saiyajins..it is easy to forget he is just a child.

Breaking the silence he smiled, almost childishly and looked to Frieza, directly at Frieza. “How long was I in there?”--This is somewhat disturbing to me...Vegeta keeps saying things almost childishly, does he know he is doing this, or is it truly a child\'s innocence?
because once he leaves Frieza\'s presence it\'s like he is back to normal.

I do fear/wonder what is in store for the little Prince...and what Frieza is doing...like I said I have an idea, but i won\'t say, I will probably be wrong anyway. I hate to be wrong.

I am very, very impressed with this story and I am so glad you updated. My brother Lucas also loves this ficcie, we read it together. ^.^ Gosh, we are nerds...but oh well. I am not getting off the comp or he will take it over. I can\'t have that!

I know i have said this before, but I truly mean it...this story is breathtaking and definately a must read! Also the characters...you have written them so well. I loved when Zarbon wha what\'s wrong with him...I could picture it...no sympothy in that voice at all..almost asked it as if he was annoyed, like nothing should be wrong with him at all.

I feel sorry for Vegeta...it makes me sad..I also feel sorry for Radditz...only a handful of Saiyajins left and Nappa is threatening him by saying he would make him wish he had died on their home planet. Also how Zarbon keeps looking at him.

Wonderfully written...
I love this story, very intriguing and mysterious...I can\'t wait for your next update.
As always keep up the excellence...

^.*
-MB-
person Kasota
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twas was indeed confusing as all hell. But still interesting. I can\'t wait to see what happens.
person Burger_Heaven:P
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Talk about holding suspense...got me muching my Snack \'a\' Jacks, for sure ^_^! I think I am suffering from a cold, wish I was in the regenaration tank thing-a-mee. That Frieza is a right MeAnIe! and the poor little gossiping nurse, i wonder what he\'ll do to her? oh and her dead friend RIP! Hmmm... This story had so much depth and emotion, a story I will like to see through to the end! Well what are you sitting there for hurry up and UPDATE:P!
person CrazyGurl
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_o I was not expecting that at all! Woah, that was really freaky. Whydid that happen? Poor chibi Vegeta, that is so sad, gross, and traumatizing. Please, please update this soon. I really want to know what is happening! This is great! MB is right you shout have more reviews, look at all the hits you have, and you only have 3 chapters up. So you know ppl like the story! It\'s amazing. ^_~
person CrazyGurl
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thats supposed to say should have* not shout >.<
person Mechanical Butterfly
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UGHHHHH THAT WAS SOOOO GROSSSSSS!!!!!! I loved it!!!!!! This is so great! I was waiting for you to update this one!!!! You are such an excellent writer and I love fics with Frieza...*shakes head* yes I am a freak I love Frieza!!!!! You write his personality so well. I was totally enthralled while reading this, if Vegeta himself came to my door I wouldn\'t have stopped reading...wait let me rephrase that. I would have stopped reading for a second so he could sit on my chair and I would sit on his lap and we would read it together. I love it!!! I think you deserve way more reviews than you have, this is one of the greatest fics here! Its just awesome!
person jaygoose
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, you updated my favorite story. It was awesome. I loved it and I\'m glad that it was a bit unclear, I like to work a bit for my stories. As you probably have already guessed from my story. I want to be your beta, Pleaseee! I really want to, I have the time. So what do you say?
person Sarie
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You never cease to amaze me! Every chapter only leaves me wanting more! I can\'t think of any helpful criticism to give you, which says a lot because I am normaly full of it! The only improvment you could make, would be to update more often, lol!

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