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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm..... Now you\'ve got me wondering. This is so different than any other story about Vegeta\'s past that Ive read; I\'m enjoying it immensly. I really hope you continue with this, it\'s that good!
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is very original! I love it. You have an excellent writing style! I am hooked! I can\'t wait to see what unfolds, it\'s so well written! ~^-^~
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January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting, well you got me hooked. I really want to know what happens next. This is a great story. ^ ^
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This seems to be a very interesting story...showing the likeness of Vegeta has to Frieza. (although I personally think he became that way after he met Frieza) but I like the start of the story none the less, and I can\'t wait to see what direction it\'s going to take. So please continue.
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January 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story so far. You have the ability to create tension and unease in your stories without giving too much information away. I really hope you\'ll continue with this fic! Good luck!