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January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are you going to make a nother chapter. Because I really like stories that has Roy and Ed they look so good toether.
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January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was not a realy interesting story! u can do better!
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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwww this was just the awesomest full metal slash i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I cannot express just how much I have wanted to see something like this from the first moment I saw Mustang on screen. There is a man who was drawn to be slashed! Your use of canon is brilliant, as is your characterisation. Of course, very nice smut, too. Bravo.
If I had to pick, I would say you could use another beta reader. Some of the typos in this were confusing and distracting from the story. Apart from that, I cannot fault it. Ed\'s such a cutie! *fangirl squee*
If I had to pick, I would say you could use another beta reader. Some of the typos in this were confusing and distracting from the story. Apart from that, I cannot fault it. Ed\'s such a cutie! *fangirl squee*
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*big pervert grin*
THis is so cool, plus, the FIRST Fullmetal Alchemist fic I\'ve ever read, and I\'m glad it was this one.
^_^
Good Job keep it up!
THis is so cool, plus, the FIRST Fullmetal Alchemist fic I\'ve ever read, and I\'m glad it was this one.
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Good Job keep it up!
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, talking about a love/hate-relationship. But apart from that... Wow! That was seriously awesome!
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August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Applauds you*
Oh, what fun... hee hee! You gotta love Roy and Ed... and Ed's happy little temper and denial makes him so darned cute~!! Great job with Ed's huffiness... XD Scowling pantsless Edward = <3
Oh, what fun... hee hee! You gotta love Roy and Ed... and Ed's happy little temper and denial makes him so darned cute~!! Great job with Ed's huffiness... XD Scowling pantsless Edward = <3
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May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yum...now that\'s what I call a lemon! What really sells it is the banter between them, it feels like you were actually writing characters and not Random Joe A and B. Nobody melts with gooey, lovey-dovey emotions either, which is very appropriate. Well done.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^! Awesome job.
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know for as much as people complain about lack of character attraction toward one another and the whole \"mental scarring\" that Ed would have after this, I really think they\'re missing the point that this is a PWP - aka Plot What Plot. It\'s just written for the fun of it and to be and and well written, and you did an absolutely fantastic job in every sense of what it is supposed to be. This is quite htly tly one of the best PWP yaoi fics I have read in quite some time. Don\'t take it so seriously people! And Keep up the fantastic writing, I really hope to see more! :3