rate_review Reviews

Man did you have make Radditz one of the bad guys HE one of my favorites characters, like the story by the way

i enjoyed ur stories all of them

For the love of everything chocolate!!! I didn\'t know you updated!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! But I\'m glad I checked!!! I hope Geta\'s going to be ok... and everyone else!!!!!!! You SO need to update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

HEY!!! UPDATE ALREADY!!!!!! *growls* i wanna read whats next damnit! I CAN\'T TAKE IT ANYMORE!!!!!!!! U HAVE TO UPDATE NOOOOOOOOOWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love it

Great fic
KEEP GOING!!!
Plez and thank u!!

YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLY YOU UPDATED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Would you belive I\'ve been checking everyday ^ ^ SO Goku and Geta are finally together again!!!!!!! YYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYY Such a sweet reunion!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BUT I wanna see some action between the two, if only for a little bit, you know some time to themselve\'s????????????? PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update as soon as you can ^-^ I know you\'re busy so it\'s understandable that you can\'t post a chapter everyday or whatever!!!!!

Loving you\'re work!!!!!!!!!

Ozumas Girl OUT!!!!!!!! WWWWWEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

After reading your a/n, I think you\'re actually looking for pity or something. Because if you had really any intention of taking off the st you you probably would have just done it but instead, it kinda just seems you wanted people to review and talk ya out of it. I heard of your story from a website whose host kinda flamed it because of the way you made vejita so pitiful and pathetic- her words, not mine. After reading, I gotta agree with her on that. you took away the essence of what makes vejita, vejita... his pride. I\'m not trying to flame because thats not my style but you really should think about trying to gvejivejita some respect. you made him like a lapdog just like camero said. i respect orignality but maybe next time you should trying writing a fic that stays even remotely true to the characters. Theres no point in using akira\'s characters if you dont intend to keep them even slightly the way he created them. No offense, but I find it disrespectful and empty. You dont write bad but nex ttime write with a little regard for readers who dont want to get sick reading about goku and his french poodle vejita.
Just a suggestion

Finally another chapter. I was getting a little worried that this might be a discontinued fic. great chapter, I\'m looking forward to the next. Update soon.

~Kira~

FINALLY!!!!!!!!!! i thought u were just gonna stops fis fic all together thank God u didn\'t ^^ what took u so long to update?Huh? well anyway nice chap i hope u update SOON \'cause i want to see what happans next. oh & before i forget how was it only Piccolo was able to understand Vegeta & Tein couldn\'t? did i miss somethin\'?