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YYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m glad you are still writing this fic!!!! as you know heh heh!! ^_^ anyway, Vegeta is too cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! keep going!!!!!! and if anyone flame\'s!!!! you just tell me and I Ozumas Girl will take care of them yep!!!!!!!!

I\'m sorry for the late review. I was sorting a few things out in my head. Nothing to do with your story. But yeah, I had to get my head clear on a few things.

Anyway, I aad tad that you have decided to go a wit with everything. If it helps, I don\'t see Vegeta as a lapdog in this... y I\' I\'ve also read fics where he is Freiza\'s slave and I don\'t really like them, because they are demeaning to him, but your suru Vegeta has an open, healthy relationship with Goku. I love it anyway. :-)

This latest chapter was horrible for Goku, and yeah, I was hoping that he wouldn\'t get raped by Brolli and Radditz (shudder), but it\'s done now, and I can only hope that he can deal with this. Vegeta sensed something, I\'m wondering if he felt what Goku went through, or if he just knows that something is wrong.

I love that he wants to learn to fight. :-)

I loved this:

\"As he opened his mouth, Piccolo muttred,\"

“What is it, Sayajiin? Need to take a leak?”

LOL! Nice bit of humour, near the end of an angsty chapter. :-)

I really hope that Bulma is going to implement her plan soon. I don\'t like the sound of Freiza accompanying Goku to the med centre... sounds worrying.

Good chapter. Looking forward to the next. :-)

Okay, first I\'ll be honest! I can\'t really remember the whole story because you haven\'t updated for a while, but I know that I really loved it (and still do) because I saved it on my favorites list. I never really liked Vegeta (spelling?) being the submissive one but I\'ve begun to like it. Especially with your story, I love how you\'ve written Vegeta. The way he acts with his cubs and with Goku. I hope you don\'t get to discouraged with the flames and stop writting completely because I\'m really looking forward to seeing what happens next. I really want to know who was spying! And how the training with Vegeta and Picoagaiagain spelling?) goes. So please ignthe the flames (use them to keep warm while writing) and update soon!!!!

You really shouldn\'t let a few idiot people, who have nothing better to do than look for people to annoy, to push you into doing something you normawoulwouldn\'t do. Your stories are very good, and I have been enjoying this one very much, and deeply loved the original \"My Suru Lover\" It is an interesting and inventive idea and you write it very well.

For those who don\'t like this, then they have the option not to read if they feel it\'s not for them. You provided the necessary warnings, there is nothing more you can do. If this (no doubt) very small group of people, who seem to go around simply for the sheer pleasure of flaming, are too amazingly stupid to understand the warnings, then they shouldn\'t be on these sites in the first place.

Hor, ir, if you feel more comfortable removing your stuff, then that is, of course, your option. It won\'t stop them though. There will always be nasty people who spend their time harassing people who are simply trying to tell a new story with familiar characters who are known and loved.

There is constructive criticism, and then there is flaming.

Criticism, which is pointed out in a calm, rational manner, regarding whichever aspects of your story the reader did not like, and why they did not like it, is constructive and perfectly acceptable, and an author should be prepared for this to occur on occasion. Not everyone is going to like what you write, no matter how well written it is. You can of course agree or disgree with their viewpoint, that\'s your choice as authauthor, just as the reader\'s choice is to express their opinion on your work.

However, flaming is never acceptable. It\'s abusive and it offers no help whatsoever. I liken flamers to people who yell and screech in a persons ear, loud, annoying and never worth listening too.

I for one love this and hope that you will indeed finish it. It\'s worth it :-)

o.o -stares- >.> U CANT TAKE DOWN A FIC JUST CAUSE OF IDIOT ASS POEPLE THAT FLAME U >__< SCREW THEM! ITS UR FIC AND OTHER APPRECIATE IT AND LIKE TO READ IT CAUSE ITS INTERSTING AND ENJOYABLE. AND IF THOSE FUCKHEADS DONT LIKE IT, THEN THEY CANN JUST PISS OFF AND SHUT THE HELL UP CAUSE NO ONE IS FORCING THEM TO READ IT, SO THEY HAVE NO RIGHT TO GO FLMAFLMAE U CAUSE THEY ARE JUST STUPID AND RETARDED AND HAVE NOTHIGN ELSE BETTER TO DO THAN HARASS GOOD AUTHORS. >_< stupid idiot poeple. O_O; WHY I OUGHTA,, -SHAKES A FIST >_< - O_o; man. Cmon if they are saying shit to u then just say shit abck to them =) MWHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH o_o >.> O_O;

-reads this on FF.net- o.o;

^______^; pats her head- O_o; o_O; BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

Flaming????Yeah,that\'s a great problem,since some people tend to be so bitch-like.........grrrrrrrRRRrrrrRRrrrrr....
I\'m sorry about U taking flames,I think that\'s just not fair:your stis ais awesome........T_T *cries*

First of all, I\'d like to respond to this:

\"I finally got the two names that I searched for! Thanks SaiyanPrincess and Getarian!\"

Sorry, that I didn\'t answer your request to contact you about the girls names in the previous chapter, but I honestly thought that you were talking about people who had personally e-mailed you, and so I didn\'t realise that you meant me, otherwise I would have definitely responded.

I was also pleased to see that you used the name, Takara, for one of the Suru\'s...big smiles. :-)
In response to your thanks...you\'re very welcome :-)

On to the review:

Ah Gods...the opening passage was so heartwrenching...for Goku to see his mate and cubs being taken away and not be able to stop it, must have been horrifying for him, and I can almost picture how baffling and frightening this must all be for Vegeta :-(

“Look at me, pet.”

I really loathe Freiza and I hate it when he calls people \"pet\" I can\'t wait for Goku to break free and destroy his maniacal arse.

\"Not one, not twice but three times had this white lizard separated him from his lover. Maybe not now, but soon the ice Lord would lie dead in front of him.\"

Yes! Keep strong Goku.

Okay, definitely creeped out by Radditz and BrollHateHate the fact that they seem to be Freiza\'s playthings...and I don\'t like the idea that they consider Goku a toy, and they need to prepare for him and vice versa...definitely getting a bad feeling about this.

Yes! Very happy that Bulma is the \'doctor\' ...I was a bit concerned over the fact that the word had quotation marks...you had me worried for a moment :-)

I don\'t know if Bulma is going to be able to help Goku, but I feel a whole lot better knowing that she is there. I was so happy that she was able to contact Piccolo and thereby allow Goku to talk with Vegeta...

\"The little Suru looked so tired and broken, but that all vanished when he saw Goku. “Kakarott!” he asked. The light in the Suru’s eyes got brighter as he looked at his mate...\"

Really loved this! Very happy that Goku was able to reassure his mate...I hope that Bulma\'s plan is a good one.

Really love this story...you are a very creative writer :-)

Lng fng forward to the next chapter.

Yay! update.
It\'s really horrible that Goku and Vegeta have separated but it\'s ok now that Piccolo has bought Vegeta. But now I\'m really worried for Goku, I wonder what Frieza\'s gonna do to him, at least he\'s got Bulma to help. ^_^

Looking forward to the next chap! ^-^

I love how Vegeta and Goku are with each other. Even stuck in that cell, where everything seems so grim, they are relaxed in each others company...so loving and tender.

You have expressed the near hopelessness of their situation beautifully in the quiet conversation, the snuggling close, the naming of their young and Vegeta\'s heartfelt words:

\"I just want to go back,\"

His fear is obvious, but I love how he has total faith in his mate :-)

Vegeta and Goku\'s reactions to being in the market place and also to seeing Frieza again were very well written... I could feel their fear, their horror, a mingling sense of uncertainty touched against a sense of unreality.

I was pleased to see Goku stand up to Frieza, appreciated his fear for his mate, but was worried that his attack didn\'t seem to phase Frieza...ki restraints?

Poor Vegeta...to be so close to his cubs, but to be unable to hold them and comfort them and then to be taunted by Radditz in regards to his mate...I must confess, I was pleased to see that Radditz and Brolli are back but I can\'t help but wonder what Radditz plans to do with Goku though, I am starting to get very worried for his well being.

I hate to think of Goku and Vegeta being separated, but at least their cubs are still with Vegeta.

I hope the green guy is who I think it is, and if it is, I hope that they can rescue Goku.

Looking forward to the next chapter :-)

Okay, like I said, I\'m useless with thinking up names so I finally got the idea to look up names and meanings on the net - I have no idea if these are 100% accurate, I just have to trust what they say. I found a site with Japanese names & their meanings - http://www.babychatter.com/japaneseboysnames.html - Anyway, feel free to check it out yourself if you don\'t like my offerings :-)

I came across the names: Saburo and Shiro, meaning, \'Third born son\' and \'Fourth born son\' respectively. I know that technically they are the 4th and 5th born son, but well, living, they are 3rd and 4th.

For the little lady, I like: Takara, meaning, \'Treasure\' Considering females are rare, it seemed appropriate.

Anyway, there are plenty of choices if mine don\'t sit well - and as they\'re your kiddies, you have to enjoy the feel of the names, so if my ideas don\'t sit well, I promise you that I will not be offended :-)

Here\'s hoping that your story continues - I love it :-)