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Hiya,
me can\'t believe it!!

Me loved this story ^__^
*squeels* me so happy with sequel ^^

And Saya may not be orriginal, but it is correct, in japanese jin means something like \'people of\' meaning saiyajin means people of saiya.

And you need names?
Ummm you could use Yasai for the girl (it means vegetable, since vegeta is one of the parents).
And Okome, it\'s something like gohan, only gohan means \'boiled\' rice and okome means \'non-boiled rice\'.

Dunno, if I\'ve been much help with the names and all, but if ya need more help feel free to ask ^^

greetz k-chan

I\'m sorry if this fic doesn\'t seem to be as popular as the original, I wasn\'t around for the unfolding of the original, I only looked it up when I came across this one and realised that this was a sequel. I loved it and I love the way that this one is coming along as well...maybe, people just aren\'t reviewing as much because there is nothing wrong with this story. Anyway, thank-you for continuing, I for one, really appreciate it. :-)

Well Goku, certainly is going to have his work cut out now...what a mess. I hope he doesn\'t lose face with his people for, seemingly, giving up.

I have my fingers crossed for who the two familiar faces are...I\'m hoping for Radditz and Brolli...but, whoever they are...this is definitely getting interesting. mmm,mmm, cubs names: Yeah, I\'m not very good at picking names either...I don\'t even have a naming book, which would have meanings and everything. I\'ll give it some thought though, and see if I can come up with some, but hopefully, others will have some ideas...fingers crossed :-)

Oh Pooh, I just read my review to you and realise that I didn\'t do a very good job of proof-reading. Where I wrote:

\"maybe, people just aren\'t reviewing as much because there is nothing wrong with this story.\"

I realise I should have placed a comma just after the word \'much\' because it now reads in a different manner. I didn\'t mean to imply that people only review if there are problems with a story. I just meant to say that: (a) Maybe people aren\'t reviewing. and (b) T is is nothing wrong with this story.

I\'ll take better care in future reviews.

...And to think that I almost didn\'t read this because of the summary, I was annoyed that Goku somehow got to be the leader of the Saiya-jins, but having read your story...I love it! I am so glad that my curiosity got the better of me :-)

I love the idea of the Saiya-jin males and the Saiya-jin male suru\'s, for me though, it actually would have been br ifr if females weren\'t a part of the equation...the suru\'s would make more sense.

I\'m a HUGE Vegeta fan, and initially was not thrilled with the idea of Yaoi, but having read \"Chains of Affection\" by Syldana - I became besotted with the idea...although, ironically enough, my preference is for Vegeta to be Uke...I love him having a super protective and possessive mate...so, I absolutely love this story :-)

I think what I love most of all, is the idea that Goku sort of raised Vegeta from a cub and Vegeta grew up seeing Goku as his mate...so bloody adorable. I have absolutely no problem with the OOC aspect of these fics, they are AU after all.

I was sorry about the Radditz scenes...My favourite yaoi pairing is V&R, but I also love Vegeta and Kakarot/Goku.

I hope that Kakarot can get to Vegeta before he is hauled away by Cooler...I hate the idea of the ice-jins touching the Prince.
...although, I have no problem with a little V&R action or even V&Br...Yup, I definitely have a Saiya-jinxSaiya-jin thing. ;-)

Can\'t wait for your next chapter...sorry for not reviewing before, but I am still pretty new to the yaoi fics...I use to only search for V&B stories...but they got so damn booooring...\'the mystery three years\' and the f***ing Cell games.

Oh that was an evil cliffhanger!!!!
I was hanging on the edge of my seat reading that, can\'t wait till nextnext chap! ^_^

Phew! That was exciting! More lil\' cubs for Vegeta! ^_^ I really hope Goku keeps them from taking his mate again. God knows what frieza\'ll do to him. But why didn\'t he come himself? I mean, why send his brother instead of coming in person?

OMG!!! i hope Goku turns up quick!
Cooler had to show up just when Vegeta was going into labour, and Vegeta said he wanted to take care of these cubs better.
Pleasssssse update soon ^_^

Not a bad start, although I have to admit I am not a big fan of super-passive Vegeta. I keep visualizing your Saiyans as advanced monkeys. That said, you do have some interesting typos. I actually liked when you used squeal instead of sequel, becaus sor sort of made sense either way (if you had said *wheee* after, then squeal would have been right). The other one that really stood out is using borrow instead of burrow.

YEAH!! YOU CAME BACK!! (does happy dance)
I really missed this story. I am sooooo happy you are doing a sequal. Very happy! ^__^
As always great chapter and I absolutely love it!
I can\'t seem to get enough of the other story! I read it two time already and I still love it.
I am, again, really happy to read the sequal I just know its gonna be great!
Well unnextnext chapter. ^_^

Yey!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I\'m soooooooooooooo glad there\'s a SEQUEL ^_^
I really enjoyed the first one and i just can\'t wait to see whapphappens in this one (you\'veeadyeady got me hooked)
Looking forward to the next chap!