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for My Suru Lover 2: Never Ending

by silveryaoi

person suisheu
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
uh-oh\'s. Just a *tiny* suggestion. Maybe you could find a few more adjectives for \"Youngsters\" instead of using that word so often? Please don\'t be mad! All in all, nice first chappie! ^__^
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 2, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 18... I am sitting here trying not to cry:( I am feeling so badly for Hermione & Severus!!! I want so much for Severus to be happy & I want Hermione to find out the truth so she can know who she really has fallen for!!! (I know she can\'t find out yet, it\'s just so sad for them!!!)

I hope that Hermione will think about the cryptic message from Minerva!!! If nothing else, I hope that she will talk to her about how she feels so that Minerva will be able to reassure Severus that what he feels is returned to a degree!!!

Will Severus be taking Ron\'s advice & write the letter to Hermione? I hope he does & soon!!!

Til chapter 19, Deb >^..^<
person Mija
schedule January 17, 0000 at 12:00 AM
omg Sinna this story was soooooooo awsome, I know its not totally finished yet, but omg I cried, at first I thought it was Inu that was diguised as Hojo but Kouga?? omg that was priceless and it made me cry to know he had grieved for her this long and had loved her for hundreds of years..sniffles..this is an awsome fic and I soo love it can not wait for the last chap, if thes ons one..you did say a chapter 7 and aon don didnt ya?? hint hint..hehe anyhow soo can not wait..please update k?? pretty please? ty ty ty huggs and smiles Mija

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