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for Yes, Master

by watchmedrown

person Akasha
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow What a story it was great i hope the you write more i wish there was more storys like this out there
person Herv�
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

I send you an email, but realize I forgot to review the fic. So rather sending another email I\'m dropping a review here.

First I liked the pairing, MTr/Gh and Tr/Gh. It\'s very rare to see Mirai Trunks being that dominant and even more rare to see him siding with Trunks.

I really hope you\'ll keep this threesome for the sequel. I think it\'s somehow even more exciting, especially since Trunks was Gohan\'s lover before. Besides, you said Goten didn\'t treat him well, with them he would be very happy, and I\'m sure Gohan would enjoy having two handsome masters.

This fic was very imaginative, and I appreciated that it didn\'t end being abusive. It was rough treatment which was expected since it was a punishment, but once it was over I was pleased they became more *gentle* and *caring* about Gohan.

I guess my favorite part is when Trunks and Mirai Trunks spit in Gohan\'s mouth and made him thanks them for doing that.

This dominant duo really create a very fascinating dynamic, and chibi Trunks add an extra humiliation dimension to it. I\'m sure that with time he\'ll get very imaginative in their domination games. Very very good fic.
person macha
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good onapteapter fic! I saw the note at the bottom that indicated that there may be more to come?
I like the bondage. A little darker than what I usually read, but not too dark. It certainly broadened my horizons.

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