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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
God, that was hot left me wet and needing just reading it.
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February 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure I've said this before...but I'll say it again. You...are amazing. Just...wow.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*speechless* *bows in absolute awe* wow...This is going on my reccmended reading list...well done...both of you..*still breathless* I...don\'t have the words...wow...Is there going to be more chapters? *sends you thousands of dollars in bribes*
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I loved it!!!
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September 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awe ending noooooooooooooooooooooo....I love this story so hot, so sexy, so rough on the ass haha. Its great I absolutly love it
~*Noel*~
~*Noel*~
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May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg... that was well... INTENSE. very well written.. I can\'t believe you made them bond though!! MORE SOON PLEASE!!!
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Erg. Not a fan of the word, \'whore.\'
Didn\'t really enjoy the second chapter as much as I did the first. Too sordid for my tastes. It\'s a shame, I was sort of hoping for an actual relationship to develop. Well written, no complaints there, just don\'t really like Vegeta or Gohan like this.
Didn\'t really enjoy the second chapter as much as I did the first. Too sordid for my tastes. It\'s a shame, I was sort of hoping for an actual relationship to develop. Well written, no complaints there, just don\'t really like Vegeta or Gohan like this.
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was ... yummy! *drools*
I\'m a bit disappointed that its over... I NEED MORE!!! (ignore the crazyness) O_o
But it was good none the less, definately worth the wait! ^_^
Hope to see more of your works soon! And have a good easter! ^-^
I\'m a bit disappointed that its over... I NEED MORE!!! (ignore the crazyness) O_o
But it was good none the less, definately worth the wait! ^_^
Hope to see more of your works soon! And have a good easter! ^-^
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April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MY LORD! That was SO! hot! I absolutly loved Gohan and Vegeta together, espiscially in this story! I beg you on my hands and knees to make another story with more of a plot but the same hot yoai! Fuck! My utter respect goet tot to you two wonderful writers.
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April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! Chapter 2! YAY!
It was... GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT, FANTASTIC GREAT!!!! :P
I loved it, like the first one, you\'ve got the amazing writing skill again, I absolutely loved how Gohan was a whore!
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\"Please fuck me, Prince Vegeta...\" Gohan arched his back and bucked with relish, then whispered as he said the following words: \"because your little whore wants you to fuck him. Good and hard.\" He gave Vegeta a groan and felt something dark seep into him. \"Fuck my ass....\" He hissed. \"Dry and fast. Make it hurt...\"
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That is great! I realllllllllly luv that!
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The pain was so hot. So were his words, his breath scalded his skin. \"Uh...oh...fu-u-u-ck!\" He gasped and wrapped his leg around the prince. It burned.... Fuck when he moved it felt like he was ripping him apart. \"So...good....\" He loved it.
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Thats really interesting how Gohan enjoys the pain so much - but as its Vegeta... who wouldn\'t!!!???
And from that bit where Vegeta fucked him, I knew it was you who wrote it! Hehe!
I don\'t want it to end... but i guess it has to... :( i wana read more of stuff like this tho! You write great! GREAT GREAT GREAT :P
Keep up good work, a very successful fic here! YAY! woop
It was... GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT, FANTASTIC GREAT!!!! :P
I loved it, like the first one, you\'ve got the amazing writing skill again, I absolutely loved how Gohan was a whore!
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\"Please fuck me, Prince Vegeta...\" Gohan arched his back and bucked with relish, then whispered as he said the following words: \"because your little whore wants you to fuck him. Good and hard.\" He gave Vegeta a groan and felt something dark seep into him. \"Fuck my ass....\" He hissed. \"Dry and fast. Make it hurt...\"
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That is great! I realllllllllly luv that!
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The pain was so hot. So were his words, his breath scalded his skin. \"Uh...oh...fu-u-u-ck!\" He gasped and wrapped his leg around the prince. It burned.... Fuck when he moved it felt like he was ripping him apart. \"So...good....\" He loved it.
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Thats really interesting how Gohan enjoys the pain so much - but as its Vegeta... who wouldn\'t!!!???
And from that bit where Vegeta fucked him, I knew it was you who wrote it! Hehe!
I don\'t want it to end... but i guess it has to... :( i wana read more of stuff like this tho! You write great! GREAT GREAT GREAT :P
Keep up good work, a very successful fic here! YAY! woop