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for Wouldn\'t It Be Good

by KahlanN

person LITHIA
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really fantastic. One amazing lemon scene there I must say. I really likew thw the Saiyans managed to go for so long, I can\'t even remember how many orgams they had :D
The speech was great! I loved how Vegeta made Gohan call him his prince, that was real good. The use of speech throughout the scene was great, you included so much - really giving the best impression of what was going on, their feelings and emotions.
Fantastic work, keep it up.
person Shinna
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a really interesting fanfic. I wonder what Goku will do when he finds out what Gohan and Vegeta did. Can\'t wait for the next chapters. Keep up the good work. update soon
person PinkChicken
schedule March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!

That was absolutly Brilliant!
person Getarian
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought at first that this was going to be a V&G as well as a Gh&V fic...boy, was I ever wrong ;-)

This was...hot! I never would have thought that I would get into a Vegeta & Gohac, bc, but so long as Gohan is all grown up, I can definitely see possibilities...especially after this!

Damn I wish I was Saiyan...I would haunt Vegeta\'s training grounds, it would be my sole mission in life :-)

Brilliant Lemons! Wonderful writing! I hope there is going to be another chapter or a follow-up. I want to know how Vegeta is going to react now that he has claimed Gohan. I want to know how everyone else is going to react as well. A jealous Goku would be a treat...too bad though, he had his chance and blew it...big time :-)
person sexysaiyan7
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow......that was AMAZING....
person Anon
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! that was great!
person Mechancial Butterfly
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*dies* AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! That was sooooooooooooooooo GOOD!!!!! MAN!!! AWESOME!!! and so well wriiten!!! This is the best Gohan/Vegeta fic I have ever read! and definately the hottest! I NEED MORE! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS GREAT- write more .. PLEASE !!!!
person WhiteDog
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn!! 0.o That was HOT!!
person Jay Goose
schedule January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was amazing. It was so good. I loved it. Yay! I am grinning so wide that my roommate is going to think that I am crazy.

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